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WITH OR WITHOUT

New postby sweets » Wed Oct 28, 2009 9:31 am

When hope ledt me i miss the way
Do not worry i did not lost even i forget the way the old way
Now i can feel happy.. maybe sad...maybe i do not know
What iam sure that i stopped running behind hopes behind old dreams inspite of being hard to me to live without DREAMS

The truth both ways are hard to live in to be like a machine or to fly in dreamland
both are full of danger plans hard crosses painfull choices


In the middle iam standing i can not remember how long seconds .. minutes .. hours ..or years i can not remeber wating for new light to walk towadrs a clue whatever is or still trying to find my way in drakness
do not think about everything
life is too short for that
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New postby sweets » Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:59 am

i fell bad 112 read my write and NO COMMENT :-? :-?
do not think about everything
life is too short for that
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New postby Xkalibur » Thu Nov 12, 2009 8:12 am

Hi. Don't worry that nobody lefts replies, maybe they read..get impressed and don't find right words to write.. :-)
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New postby sweets » Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:02 am

maybe ur right
thanks for lefting reply
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