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Love

Postby yasnie » Sat Aug 16, 2003 5:00 am

:)

Love is the thing that we can't touch,
We can't see and we can't hear it.
Love comes from whitely heart
it doesn't feel hurt when we receive that.
Love makes our heart feel softly,
walking slowly, to face the world barely.
Love is given to everyone,
with love, everyone feel glad and happy.
With love, everyone born likes a little child.
At a glance, sometimes love is cruel.
But, we feel an angel
Help to find what is the truly of love
love is the feeling you have to feel it even if you are close or far
actually it lacks the feeling of love dear
and you have too feel it
when you have affection for any one that you love
you can fell it if you are attached to some one that you love
love is something you have to express
Every once in a while you meet that special someone,
There is a trust, respect, acceptance, and love,
when u have affection to anyone that you love, you can feel it.

At a glance in a while you've met that special someone
who fills avoid in your life, and an emptiness inside your heart
between both of you, that no one else can't comprehend
When one person is upset, together you share the tears.

When one is happy, you both enjoy the emotion.
Even when you two are apart, you are not alone.
You keep each other safe in your hearts.

And at my age,
I finally got in touch with my inner self, that I'm in love.
Everybody in the world, I always try to make a friendship...I'm Yasnie please replay me
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Postby tse-en Lin » Mon Nov 03, 2003 2:22 am

:lol: Good work!Love is abstract,however,we can feel it and know it does exist. In fact,love and peace are needed by all human being.Only if we posses them,we live in the world .Without them,our world is meaningless and boring.At that time,mankind is just a"body".
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Postby yasnie » Mon Nov 03, 2003 4:17 am

Thanks alot you're a good friend that have commented my essay.
Thanks
Everybody in the world, I always try to make a friendship...I'm Yasnie please replay me
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Postby isabela » Mon Dec 29, 2003 11:00 am

Wonderful poes! Love is what we can't express it obviously.

It is like something we feel happy and warmly when it comes.

It can't touch and see, but only for feeling.
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great work

Postby Sherry » Fri Aug 27, 2004 1:12 pm

How you can write a such beautiful essay! So great!
Sherry
 

Postby _Arale_ » Fri Aug 27, 2004 3:16 pm

Love is an abtract concept. We cannot see it, we cannot touch it, we cannot hear it. But can we measure it? I think yes we can measure it through actions, feelings, attitudes...of your a-half. However, love can be measured by silence too as in my poem. :wink:
There is a saying that love starts with smiles, grows with kisses and ends with tears.

_Arale_
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