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My feeling My thinking

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My feeling My thinking

Postby trannie_nguyen » Sat Nov 15, 2003 8:02 pm

It burns my little heart
when we are making an eye contact.
His smiling is as a greatest angel
I have ever seen.
I keep his kind inside my heart.
The love I lay on him
that control my feeling my thinking.
I love him more than
anything what I have.
I love him more than the greatest
joy on this world.
But my patient always hope that
one day he will know this feeling.
To love and be loved is the greatest joy on earth.
Love decreases when it ceases to increase
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Postby cobekhohieu » Sun Nov 16, 2003 11:35 pm

Good job Trang! I hope i could read some more poems from u! Have a nice day! (^_^)
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hi sis

Postby trannie_nguyen » Mon Nov 17, 2003 4:09 am

If you want to read my some more poetrys from me, so just find the other poetry in there. I made 5 or 4 , i guess. Like "My Best Friend" Endless Love", etc... it made of me. :)
To love and be loved is the greatest joy on earth.
Love decreases when it ceases to increase
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