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Posted: **Sat Nov 15, 2003 8:02 pm**

It burns my little heart
when we are making an eye contact.
His smiling is as a greatest angel
I have ever seen.
I keep his kind inside my heart.
The love I lay on him
that control my feeling my thinking.
I love him more than
anything what I have.
I love him more than the greatest
joy on this world.
But my patient always hope that
one day he will know this feeling.

Posted: **Sun Nov 16, 2003 11:35 pm**

Good job Trang! I hope i could read some more poems from u! Have a nice day! (^_^)

Posted: **Mon Nov 17, 2003 4:09 am**

If you want to read my some more poetrys from me, so just find the other poetry in there. I made 5 or 4 , i guess. Like "My Best Friend" Endless Love", etc... it made of me. :)

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My feeling My thinking

My feeling My thinking

hi sis