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Postby shortcake » Tue Mar 16, 2004 12:07 am

:cry:
AS I LOOK AT YOUR FACE
I CAN NOT SEE A TRACE
OF SOUL
IN CONTROL
YOUR EYES CONTINUALLY RACE

WITH THE COLDNESS SO CLEAR
ALTHOUGH YOU ARE NEAR
I KNOW
WHEN YOU GO
I WILL TASTE EVERY TEAR

AND I LONG TO BELIEVE
THAT YOU WILL LEARN NOT TO GREIVE
BUT I CRY
WITH GOODBYE
AS YOUR TURNING TO LEAVE
:|
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Postby francine » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:46 pm

why are your poems sound so sad?
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Postby pinas » Tue Sep 14, 2004 9:07 pm

well..just because, i guess
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Postby charlotte » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:09 pm

that's sad... :cry: but this is reality....
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:10 pm

i feel like crying now...
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Postby charlotte » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:12 pm

pinas wrote:i feel like crying now...

oh come on... don't feel that way. people come and go. just think of the better days. just cherish every moment you've shared with him. at least you felt loved that time.
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:19 pm

hey, i was joking...
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Postby Lilian » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:26 pm

interesting poem.

nice attempt to write a sad poem......
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Postby charlotte » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:42 pm

pinas wrote:hey, i was joking...

...uhmmm, okay :roll:
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Postby pooh_bear » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:44 pm

that was a nice poem but sad.. :cry:
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