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Post by shortcake »

:cry:
AS I LOOK AT YOUR FACE
I CAN NOT SEE A TRACE
OF SOUL
IN CONTROL
YOUR EYES CONTINUALLY RACE

WITH THE COLDNESS SO CLEAR
ALTHOUGH YOU ARE NEAR
I KNOW
WHEN YOU GO
I WILL TASTE EVERY TEAR

AND I LONG TO BELIEVE
THAT YOU WILL LEARN NOT TO GREIVE
BUT I CRY
WITH GOODBYE
AS YOUR TURNING TO LEAVE
:|
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Post by francine »

why are your poems sound so sad?
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Post by pinas »

well..just because, i guess
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Post by charlotte »

that's sad... :cry: but this is reality....
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i feel like crying now...
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Post by charlotte »

pinas wrote:i feel like crying now...
oh come on... don't feel that way. people come and go. just think of the better days. just cherish every moment you've shared with him. at least you felt loved that time.
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hey, i was joking...
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Post by Lilian »

interesting poem.

nice attempt to write a sad poem......
English is my second language
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Post by charlotte »

pinas wrote:hey, i was joking...
...uhmmm, okay :roll:
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Post by pooh_bear »

that was a nice poem but sad.. :cry:
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Post by pinas »

no i wasn't joking..i have to be honest
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Post by hope4422 »

i hate the word Tears but

but i always cry
hope is life
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