goodbye

by **shortcake** » Tue Mar 16, 2004 12:07 am

AS I LOOK AT YOUR FACE
I CAN NOT SEE A TRACE
OF SOUL
IN CONTROL
YOUR EYES CONTINUALLY RACE

WITH THE COLDNESS SO CLEAR
ALTHOUGH YOU ARE NEAR
I KNOW
WHEN YOU GO
I WILL TASTE EVERY TEAR

AND I LONG TO BELIEVE
THAT YOU WILL LEARN NOT TO GREIVE
BUT I CRY
WITH GOODBYE
AS YOUR TURNING TO LEAVE

by **francine** » Tue Sep 14, 2004 8:46 pm

why are your poems sound so sad?

by **pinas** » Tue Sep 14, 2004 9:07 pm

well..just because, i guess

by **charlotte** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:09 pm

that's sad... :cry:

but this is reality....

by **pinas** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:10 pm

i feel like crying now...

by **charlotte** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:12 pm

pinas wrote:i feel like crying now...

oh come on... don't feel that way. people come and go. just think of the better days. just cherish every moment you've shared with him. at least you felt loved that time.

by **pinas** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:19 pm

hey, i was joking...

by **Lilian** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:26 pm

interesting poem.

nice attempt to write a sad poem......

by **charlotte** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:42 pm

pinas wrote:hey, i was joking...

...uhmmm, okay :roll:

by **pooh_bear** » Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:44 pm

that was a nice poem but sad.. :cry:

goodbye

goodbye

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