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Lovely Flower.

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Lovely Flower.

Postby Lee » Sat Aug 28, 2004 10:58 pm

My lovely flower
Grow stron and deepy inside my heart
and never leaves me
and here's another one
hold on to my heart
i ask you not to break it
and i will hold yours
so what do you think of these.
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Postby hope4422 » Wed Sep 29, 2004 6:52 am

nice
but I do not understand it
hope is life
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Postby mandy » Wed Sep 29, 2004 9:25 pm

so simple.......so nice..
i loved it..
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."
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Postby pooh_bear » Thu Sep 30, 2004 4:32 pm

thanks lee for that..nice one try to post some more..
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Postby Dixie » Thu Sep 30, 2004 11:50 pm

I wonder what the meaning of flower is in the poem.
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Postby pooh_bear » Fri Oct 01, 2004 2:07 pm

i think his love one... :wink:
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