Lovely Flower.

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Lee

Lovely Flower.

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My lovely flower
Grow stron and deepy inside my heart
and never leaves me
and here's another one
hold on to my heart
i ask you not to break it
and i will hold yours
so what do you think of these.
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hope4422
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Post by hope4422 »

nice
but I do not understand it
hope is life
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Post by mandy »

so simple.......so nice..
i loved it..
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."
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Post by pooh_bear »

thanks lee for that..nice one try to post some more..
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Post by Dixie »

I wonder what the meaning of flower is in the poem.
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Post by pooh_bear »

i think his love one... :wink:
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