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All The Way

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All The Way

Postby jonrey10 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:10 pm

i love you...
but you don't love me...
i care for you...
i hope you care for me too...
everytime i see you...
my feeling goes up & down...
i don't know...
do you care...?
i only care for you...
i just love you...
but what about you...?
i'll be here...
patiently waiting...
for your feelings...
to get developed...
even though...
we agreed...
that i will stop...
this ridicule...
i'll still love you...
i'll still care...
no matter what...
i'll still wait...
until you're mine...
all the way...
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 2:46 pm

IT'S FICTION
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Postby jonrey10 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:28 pm

no, that's how i feel towards her... :oops:
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c",) I'm here... all the way c",)
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:18 pm

i don't think so...
actions speak louder than words kid
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Postby jonrey10 » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:47 pm

IT'S TRUE! I'M NOT INVENTING THINGS. YOU ONLY KNEW THAT I'M NOT CAPABLE OF COMPOSING THOSE KINDS OF POEMS. BUT I WAS JUST INSPIRED TONIGHT, THAT'S WHY I CAME UP WITH WHAT I FEEL RIGHT NOW ABOUT HER & POSTED THAT DAMN POEM!
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:53 pm

you don't have to shout...
my opinion is still my opinion ok...
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Postby charlotte » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:56 pm

jonrey10, may be if taht's how you really feel for that girl, then you have to prove yourself worthy for her.
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Postby pinas » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:58 pm

you got my point damn right...
i'm outa here then...
if you're right, you're right...
if i'm right...i AM right.
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Postby charlotte » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:00 pm

don't be mad my friend. the one i gave you is one good suggestion. i kow you can do it.
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Postby Lilian » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:33 pm

nice one....

true feeling exist once in a life time...

jorney go for it...
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