All The Way

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i love you...
but you don't love me...
i care for you...
i hope you care for me too...
everytime i see you...
my feeling goes up & down...
i don't know...
do you care...?
i only care for you...
i just love you...
but what about you...?
i'll be here...
patiently waiting...
for your feelings...
to get developed...
even though...
we agreed...
that i will stop...
this ridicule...
i'll still love you...
i'll still care...
no matter what...
i'll still wait...
until you're mine...
all the way...
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IT'S FICTION
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Post by jonrey10 »

no, that's how i feel towards her... :oops:
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i don't think so...
actions speak louder than words kid
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IT'S TRUE! I'M NOT INVENTING THINGS. YOU ONLY KNEW THAT I'M NOT CAPABLE OF COMPOSING THOSE KINDS OF POEMS. BUT I WAS JUST INSPIRED TONIGHT, THAT'S WHY I CAME UP WITH WHAT I FEEL RIGHT NOW ABOUT HER & POSTED THAT DAMN POEM!
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you don't have to shout...
my opinion is still my opinion ok...
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Post by charlotte »

jonrey10, may be if taht's how you really feel for that girl, then you have to prove yourself worthy for her.
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you got my point damn right...
i'm outa here then...
if you're right, you're right...
if i'm right...i AM right.
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Post by charlotte »

don't be mad my friend. the one i gave you is one good suggestion. i kow you can do it.
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Post by Lilian »

nice one....

true feeling exist once in a life time...

jorney go for it...
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Post by pooh_bear »

poems are poems, they can be interpreted in a different manner or different ways. as long as the author or the poet knows what's the true meaning of his work then it's okay. readers will always interpret differently, they will always give their own ideas towards it. :wink:
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pooh_bear wrote:poems are poems, they can be interpreted in a different manner or different ways. as long as the author or the poet knows what's the true meaning of his work then it's okay. readers will always interpret differently, they will always give their own ideas towards it. :wink:
I understand, thank you. :D
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