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Sonnet '19
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:26 pm
by francine
Sonnet '19
These days i had with thee were all so blue
The time ye came and left mine heart in tear
I gave thee all, still loving you is true
So bye my love and now please leave me dear
Thou caused me tears and pains i bear
When this I say, shall thou be mad at me?
Thou broke mine heart and left me in despair,
All these I say 'coz these hath given me.
I can't blame thee if thou can't love me so
I'll still be here and I will be the same
'Coz past is past and I don't want to know
For every night i will call on thy name.
Forgive me love for all those things I've done,
Forgive me love if thine make love be gone.
--francine--[/url]
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:28 pm
by pinas
you made a sonnet???
shakespeare is that you?
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:33 pm
by francine
yup.... it's a sonnet. actually, my teacher way back in high school asked us to make one as one of the assignments in subject literature.... i changed the title though....
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:35 pm
by pinas
o yeah...
we had that activity as well back in college..you know how it is in arts and letters...paperwork and all...
but i think my work is trashcan food...
and i don't wanna deprive my transhcan of its breakfast...
so there...
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:44 pm
by pooh_bear
wow! i thought that was shakespeare too..but that was so sad, i think i can relate.
:(
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:55 pm
by francine
pooh_bear wrote:wow! i thought that was shakespeare too..but that was so sad, i think i can relate.
:(
yeah.. i'm also wondering why my poems are sad...
and why is it that i can write i poem every time that i'm sad. not when i'm inspired.
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:56 pm
by pinas
it doesn't follow that if you're inspired, you are happy anyway
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:58 pm
by francine
pinas wrote:it doesn't follow that if you're inspired, you are happy anyway
right!
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:07 pm
by jonrey10
you should make a jolly poem
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:11 pm
by francine
jonrey10 wrote:you should make a jolly poem
i can't. i tried once. but i can't really compose a nice one....
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:15 pm
by pinas
sad ones are much better anyway...
so touching, so tragic...
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:16 pm
by francine
pinas wrote:sad ones are much better anyway...
so touching, so tragic...
on the contrary.. it doesn't uplift one's spirit..
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:20 pm
by pinas
it does!!!
it depends on the person actually...
i love sad stories..
Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 2:24 pm
by francine
pinas wrote:it does!!!
it depends on the person actually...
i love sad stories..
good! :D
