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When i recall

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When i recall

Postby greatJim » Tue Sep 21, 2004 3:42 am

Someday
I believe i have been lost
Somewhere
Someplace
only left me one
--the world
And what give me passion
the memory
the friends
or my heart
(When i recall)
:D :D
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Postby greatJim » Tue Sep 21, 2004 12:01 pm

Could i be a poet?
i see a film today,
and have lunch in the pub near my house.
i still feel not very good after two months' sickness.
when i get up ,awake in the morning,i often feel dizzy,and with a heavy head.
then i turn on the recorder nearby .
i listen the radio.and sometimes hear a short while english news.
After brushing my teeth,i wash my face with water.
oh!one new day begins.
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Postby charlotte » Tue Sep 21, 2004 5:59 pm

yup. :wink: you could be a poet. :wink:
F r E n Z Y F r I e N d
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Postby jonrey10 » Tue Sep 21, 2004 7:05 pm

GreatJim the Poet!
Sounds good...
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Postby greatJim » Wed Sep 22, 2004 4:44 am

Today i would like to say the word---"heartbreak"
yes,it seems i am a beginner in writing in English.
And---
and i seldom use it in my ordinary life.
But what i want to say is it is a good way for me express my feeling inside ,
makes me feel calm and sense the touch of pease in my heart.
of course,also gives me a pride ,like talking to the world here.
---
My heartbreak happened when i recieved a letter from a girl .
At that time,i walked to the window,leaving the paper on the bed.
i think i haven't cry.i just thought the end of the world came.And She said she had been married ...
Now i can say the story here.
And the time had passed for about seven years.
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Postby greatJim » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:44 am

Since the icons here give me some self-confidence,i will try to tell the story,Thanks .
I shall say when you fall in love love with a girl,you should insist,stick to ,no matter what will happen in the future.
The girl what i met during my school life names Xiao Yi.
We recognized with each other at 1992.
At that time,we were studying by working in a institution together.
She was the monitor of Class 1.
coincidently SHe and I were assigned to the same work cell.Other groups are three persons or over three of students.
I am in Class 2.
In our department there were 3 classes at our grade.
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Re: When i recall

Postby RedRose » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:03 pm

greatJim wrote:Someday
I believe i have been lost
Somewhere
Someplace
only left me one
--the world
And what give me passion
the memory
the friends
or my heart
(When i recall)
:D :D


sounds like a Da You poem:-)
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Postby greatJim » Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:18 am

Now Xiao Yi must have her own child .And we have grown up,too.
I also has been married,with my lovely wife.live together.
Does she sometimes think of me?i don't know.
we just met when we were young,and spent a happy period of time.
during that time,i am a junior student,and she is,too.
Ssometimes i think the junior student can't escape the destiny to fall in love with others.
but at that time i am just a boy,often feel alone.
Is the God make such an arrangement ,let Xiaoyi and I,get along with each other for once,and let this realationship last for 5 months?
If so,why not much longer,or all my life?
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Postby greatJim » Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:12 am

Xiao Yi is a northern local girl,she is the eldest daughter of a well-position family.
And i am from south.Beijing is an unknown city for me.
at that time,i was 19.and shy,introvert.
I like reading very much,and made me more reserve.
We get along not bad.that's really strange.maybe because she is very polite.
One day,a meeting was convoked.And we will follow with the engineers , doing the work.
One woman said,"Jim is gifted,i would like to lead him."
--After the meeting,Xiao yi joked with me,"you have been praized."
I said,"i were really embarassed just now."
She went to reticency.
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Postby greatJim » Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:13 am

jonrey10 wrote:GreatJim the Poet!
Sounds good...

i 'll try. :D :D
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