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I MISS YOU

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I MISS YOU

Postby True Fire » Thu Sep 23, 2004 12:43 am

I MIss You

I miss you much
Sit in front of the window
Look into the distance
Do you belive that
I can see you

I miss much, too
Take a seat by the dorr
I can hear the voice of your breathe
Do you believe it

I miss you very much
Everyday, I devoutly fly a pigeon
Who will tell you
How much I think of you
have you heard it

I miss you very much, too
From morning to night everyday
Crescent moon and full moon
They will show you my yearn for you
Have you seen it

I gently miss you
i softly miss you, too

A soft wind kisses the flowers
I have chosen you, you have chosen me
Since that choice we made
I would always always miss you very much
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Postby Dixie » Thu Sep 23, 2004 11:03 am

Beautiful!
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Re: I MISS YOU

Postby francine » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:24 pm

PoLoo wrote:I MIss You

I gently miss you
i softly miss you, too

A soft wind kisses the flowers
I have chosen you, you have chosen me
Since that choice we made
I would always always miss you very much


i love this part... wonderful.... :D
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Postby True Fire » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:34 pm

Thanks to dixie and francine


:D :) :D :)
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Postby _Arale_ » Fri Sep 24, 2004 3:55 pm

Polloo, a nice poem really !

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Postby mandy » Fri Sep 24, 2004 7:06 pm

its so nice....so touching.....so unbelievable..... :cry:
"You..my love...
created a new path to lead my life easily.."
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Postby RedRose » Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:54 pm

I can exactly understand what PoLoo means in the poem:-)
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Postby _Arale_ » Sat Sep 25, 2004 4:50 am

wow, Redrose, give us some tips .How can you get it exactly? I guess you are related in that poem ,aren't you ? :_))

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Postby RedRose » Sat Sep 25, 2004 5:13 am

Arale, Poloo wrote the poem for a cute girl. In the other words, PoLoo loves a girl:-)

only when a person is in love, he/she can write such a romantic poem :wink:
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Postby _Arale_ » Sat Sep 25, 2004 6:11 am

Ahh, I see. Thanks much Redrose. well, you are full of experience! :wink:

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