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You Could Never Be Mine...

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You Could Never Be Mine...

Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 12:37 pm

whenever i look at you, i feel a sudden sadness
because i know you are someone who could never be mine,
maybe you have noticed the sudden changes i'm having lately
i just couldn't handle it anymore
i cannot go on pretending that you are just my friend
when deep down inside,,,you are special.

i hate myself for not being able to
admit this stupid feeling i have for you
im afraid of the consequences that are bound to happen..
your smile keeps on haunting me, my mind is telling me to forget you
BUT HOW???

those times that we have spent together will always be with me
coz i know,,, it's all i have of you
if ever the time comes that you will be able to know that way im
feeling
promise me you'll never hate me

i know its wrong to love you and there's nobody to blame but me
im not aware that i have been falling for you until that time
and it hurts me so much to know that you could never love me
the way im loving you

the distance between us is GETTING BIGGER
i couldn't do anything but to admire from a distance
so please forgive me for being so foolish
i know whatever happens,,, you and i will be a fantasy
only in my dreams can i hold you...
only there shall you be mine...
but when the dream is finally over,,,
reality will creep in my heart and will proclaim that you are
someone,,,
WHO COULD NEVER BE MINE
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Postby Dixie » Thu Sep 23, 2004 12:39 pm

oh... so beautiful... and sad at the same time.
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:18 pm

Thanks for replying, Ms. Dixie Chix! :D
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Postby Dixie » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:32 pm

... Kong
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:36 pm

I don't want to include the Kong. It doesn't sound nice.
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Postby Dixie » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:38 pm

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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 2:09 pm

Go loco over Kong... :D
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Postby Lilian » Thu Sep 23, 2004 2:11 pm

nice poem.......

she just not into u ...hehe...... :wink:
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 2:53 pm

Yes, sad to say... she could never be mine. :(
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Postby RedRose » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:02 pm

jonrey, it is a nice essay:-) very poetic. I like it
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