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YOU!!!! (grrrrrrrrrrrrr)

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YOU!!!! (grrrrrrrrrrrrr)

Postby francine » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:32 pm

you are wondering though
how things went wrong
if these will all be clearly seen
you think of it so

you may not realize
the pains that you've caused
now all of these have sucked
and tangled the ones i have sought

and what could be the matter then
you kept on pondering thoughts
playing unaware of everything
insisting that you can't do anything

you brought this all up
this baby in my womb
how can you ever forget
that you too are part of this mess!!!

--francine--

sorry, i can't think of a title for this one...
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:35 pm

A good title might be "A Part Of The Mess".
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:37 pm

jonrey10 wrote:A good title might be "A Part Of The Mess".


hmmmmmmm .... can be...... :)
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Postby pooh_bear » Thu Sep 23, 2004 7:44 pm

you francine? :shock:
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Postby francine » Thu Sep 23, 2004 7:52 pm

pooh_bear wrote:you francine? :shock:


i don't know... i really don't know....
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Postby jonrey10 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 8:00 pm

Somehow... Somewhere... Somewhat...
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