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Honest Dream

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Honest Dream

Postby trannie_nguyen » Wed Oct 20, 2004 2:37 am

Honest Dream

I am faithful and studious
I wonder if I can have my English teacher’s please approval on writing skills
I hear the singing from the music room, which is so mysterious and warm
I see the football players walking on their way to the field.
I want to share my life as a sincere poem although I can’t find the ways to tell.


I pretend to be the shepherd who would like to listen to lectures from everyone
I feel awful when I can’t say the right words because of my funny accent
I touch the English words in my valuable books
I worry everyone is laughing at my essays
I cry when I get bad grades, even when I try so much
I am faithful and studious.


I understand being a student is that you must try hard to do your best
I say I have religious faith on my mind
I dream of traveling to Italy, to Hong Kong, to Paris because I’m like a crane at home
I try not to cry when I receive an excellent honor diploma on graduation day
I am faithful and studious.
To love and be loved is the greatest joy on earth.
Love decreases when it ceases to increase
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Postby Asep » Wed Oct 20, 2004 11:04 am

Hello Trannie.... :) You seem to be a lil desperate right now.... Don't you know you can always count on such friends as Dixie, RedRose, Jonrey and many more when you need someone to help you improve your speaking skills? :)
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Postby trannie_nguyen » Thu Oct 21, 2004 3:07 am

well , thanks a lot for your comfort. I think I can count on you guys. But this is just a poem, it's not really based on my feelings. I just made it for fun and it's such a long time, i haven't been in here.. anyway thanks and i know i have lot of mistakes...but we all are Eng. learner right? :wink:
Have fun
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Love decreases when it ceases to increase
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