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THe newspaper I wanted to read had been sold out.Everyday I read it.it named <information for reference>.
NOw I only could see some books and magazines.The music floated in the newspaper and book shop .I knew it was the syphony of <liang and zhu>,which was a famous vilon conterto ,talking about the story of a couple of Chinese lover .
It was a folk story.But the movement made me feel sad suddenly.Since it was the part of the lovers changing into butterfly.
Which made me sorrow ,reminding me the story of Franscine and me.
And especially at this time I would left the school soon.
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I was preparing the Toefl test from the beginning of the 2nd year.
Because of the things happened on me,I felt the country never gave us chance to speak out the words.And the lessons were old-fashioned too.
Which I read ,which I felt interesting,couldn't be found in the lessons.
I liked modern poem,but they taught us classic ones.which could not satisfy me.
The Toefl was the foremost thing I should do if I prepared to study abroad.So I began to recite the english vocabulary everyday.
To refresh myself,I began to play volleyball everyafternoon.
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After leaving from the little shop,I decided to have a look on the volleyball playground.
I made my way ,coming across seceral classroom building,then saw the buzzing playground.
I stood before a volleyball playing ground,and remembering...
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Franscine always came here with her classmates---several girls ,maybe were her roommates.As I didn't know at that time.
She was ardent,always happy.
the volleyball game was often spontaneous,seemed like several boys and girls,didn't knew with each other,and set up a group.Since the grounds with net were limited.SOmetimes we played just in a round.practising passing the ball.
I always went there by myself at that time.So soon we had recognized .
Sometimes we played the match.And Franscine ,Ping,and Cui (I knew their names afterwards),plus me ,could be in the same team.
I was fairly tall,and with slim figure,Franscine passed the ball to me,And I made a drop shot.
That was successful.Unbelievable sometimes.we played together fairly good.And her classmates encouraged us to do this,made both of us more audacious.
Once we accompanyed very well,and I jumped to smash.All of us exclaimed and laughted loudly.
I met with them almost every afternoon,and made great fun,after reading and reviewing the test paper of Toefl.
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The test was after the May-1 holiday,and during the holiday,almost all my classmates went out for traveling.I stayed in the room.
That afternoon,when I finnished a model test,I looked the clock,it was about dinner time.But I said,"to do some exercise."
Then I went to the volleyball playground.I had forgottern it was in the holiday,there were little students playing there.
I looked around,and to my surprise,Franscine was there.She was alone there,without her classmates by side.
together with them,there was a male student from the department of apparatus who I knew.
I said "HI!"he answered "hello" to me.
And I glanced to Franscine on the other side of the round.She looked shy.And with red color on her face suddernly.I nodded to her,thinking it was really little chance to see her came here by herself.
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I knew if I said at that afternoon,it suddernly rained,the readers would not believe that and laugh at me.and wanted to say I was just a bad storyteller,a mountebank.BUt I would like tell you sometimes life was extremely a choice by God.
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NOw I standed beside the playground,everything in my eye was so peaceful,full of gladness ,the people was carefree.But i knew it was just a thing in a moment.Like at that afternoon the moment which Franscine and me had met,which changed my fate.
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The weather was cloudy that day.Suddenly gales came .THe football was light and lost the direction since being blowed .We decided to end the game ,and the perons dispersed.The rain Dropped down quickly.I looked upon Franscine,she was hesitating,I said to her loudly,"sit behind me on my bike.I take you to the dormitary."
She shaked her head in silence.i said,"Come on."
she complyed at last.and got closer, sitting onto bike's backseat.I rushed into the rain and soon ,the heavy rain made us soaked.
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Franscine got a fever because of the raining.The test was also ended for me.I got a score of 580,just touch the line passing.Not enough for applying the scholorship.
I knew she was sick by her friend ,Cui,for we met one day on the road to classroom.
I made a call to her dormitary.She was in recovering.ANd said that was nothing.But I said I wanted to see her.
She answered ,and told me to wait under the house at five o'clock.
When I saw her,she was gaunt.And I bought some apples in my hand.She smiled softly to me.
"let's take a walk."
"well."I answered.
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I glanced my watch,it was the time for dinner now.I had a last look at the volleyball ground,And walked away the place.
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jim ur story is very catchy...anyway continue...i will share my opinion at the end of the story..

keep writing....
English is my second language
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Lilian wrote:jim ur story is very catchy...anyway continue...i will share my opinion at the end of the story..

keep writing....
I think I have done my best,whatever,thanks for your encourage.
today is weekend. :lol:
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I roamed on the way back to the dormitary,and walked into a fast-food restaurant.
The restaurant was refurbished.selling some foods like hamburg,frying chicken meat,etc.But not KFC.i guessed KFC was not permitted in the schoolgardern.
Franscine,Now,where were you?Were you OK?Oh,I knew,we were impossible.Even from beginning.But,Could Love be a fault?
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In our department,the atmosphere was good and free,in general meaning.
We studied literature,so in all the aspects,the free atmosphere was necessary.
But Frascine was learning the law,she was long at rational things.
Sometimes we quarreled with many things,like moral,crime,law,and responsibility,etc.
But,obviously we couldn't went into occordance at last.
But I didn't care too much at that time.
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I remembered she asked me "can you cook?",when we came to this place ,the same spot as today,after taking a walk that afternoon when she was in ill.We sat down .
"I can do some ...sorts of."I nodded,and smiled,"I can cook some kinds like fish...."
I saw her eyes shined,and really affecting.
"Can you do it for me?"She looked even more beautiful and asked in puerility.
"Of course...why not?"I was surprised why she asked me that.
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:shock: :?: i am so interested to read the next story... :D
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francine wrote::shock: :?: i am so interested to read the next story... :D
BY the characters in the story falling into love with each other,
I am falling into love with Francine ,too.
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take a rest day. :oops:
I am tired. :cry:
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greatJim wrote:
francine wrote::shock: :?: i am so interested to read the next story... :D
BY the characters in the story falling into love with each other,
I am falling into love with Francine ,too.
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Franscine suddernly drew my hand and said,"Let's cook a fish."ANd before I realized what had happened,she had left from the seat and hastened me.
I said,"but we have made the order."
"Let it be."She was so excited and I couldn't help laughing."But where ?"
"I have a boiler ,just in our dormitary."
I guessed she was lack of nutrition after being sick.And said,"good idea.Let's go."
We dashed to the market for fresh food.and bought two fishes,some bean curd.I knew how to do some simple dishes,like fish soup,frying egg,etc.
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Till today I still could not help laughing when I recalled this part of story happened between Franscine and me.
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When we succeeded to dodge the asking by the guard of the girl students' building.I entered into their dormitary the first time.
There was a kind of female atmosphere in the room,clean and tidy.
When I was eager to devote myself to the cooking And had cleaned up all the stuffs of the fish in the water-room,I came back to the room,and said,"we can cook now.Where is your boiler?"
She took out a cup ,and smiled,"here it is ."
I was really surprised at that moment when I saw the "boiler","you mean this is what you said it the boiler?"
"yes,It's an electric cup."she answered me seriously.
"BUt..."I was gasted.
She added,"I brew the fast noodle by it.why couldn't a fish?"
"Yes,..let us try..."I wanted to say it was a bit small,but closed my mouth at last.
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francine wrote:
greatJim wrote:
francine wrote::shock: :?: i am so interested to read the next story... :D
BY the characters in the story falling into love with each other,
I am falling into love with Francine ,too.
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greatJim wrote:I like this photo very much.
what? mine? :roll: :oops: :roll:
thank you. :wink:
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So I really felt like to laugh when Franscine was seriously cooking the fish as what I taught her to do nearby.
I said,"since the eletric-heating cup is so small,i guess you 'd better slice the fish into many pieces."
ANd she did it exactly.and murmured by herself,"seems Like Japanese food.Hmmm..."
She looked really lovely,And I said,"Give me an English book,I will take the Toefl test in the next few days."
Franscine turned back and took out one easily,and threw it to me ,"just enjoy yourself."
I began to read book.
After fairly long time,it seemed like the fish was cooked.WE began trying to taste it.Just at that moment,the door was opened,Ping,who was the another girl playing volleyball together,came back from the classroom.
She was surprised to find I was in."hello,Jinn."She said,"Franscine,what the hell are you doing?"
"we are cooking."Franscine said calmly.
I was embarassed so much and flustered saying,"I 'll go outside to buy some others for eating."
When I prepared to find a way to flee away,Franscine whooped behind me,"come back!"
I stopped there.
"Well,well.I'll go out,i'll go out."Ping said,"JInn,you stay here.She need you."
ANd I looked PIng going out and knocking the door behind her,and heard the sound of her laughing from the corridor.
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francine wrote:
greatJim wrote:I like this photo very much.
what? mine? :roll: :oops: :roll:
thank you. :wink:
Francine,Since i don't know what the "Franscine" will do in the story.I can't write it as your name.But I hope you could like "her".
Whatever,I had made wrong in my last story. :lol: :lol:
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greatJim wrote:
francine wrote:
greatJim wrote:I like this photo very much.
what? mine? :roll: :oops: :roll:
thank you. :wink:
Francine,Since i don't know what the "Franscine" will do in the story.I can't write it as your name.But I hope you could like "her".
Whatever,I had made wrong in my last story. :lol: :lol:
it's ok. :wink: :P :P :P
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The rumor about we stewed the fish in a cup in the girls' dormitary speaded out quickly.and everybody knew that including the classmates in our department.They all laughed about us.

They all said Jinn had fallen love with Franscine.But I was really shamed when they said it like to say a joke.So I didn't connect with Franscine anymore,and she didn't ,either.
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I finnished eating the fast food,incuding a hamburg and a cup of chocolate.then went out the dinning hall.

I said to myself,"at that evening,the fish is OK,but that's really a meal to kitten."
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I came back to my room--206,and nobody was in.I sprawled on the bed.And the guitar in the corner came into my view,which reminded me of one classmate of mine,Liao,who had now became a pop song star.In the college time Liao was a good friend of mine.Although classmates thought he was always like a miserable daydreamer.
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Since I liked poem so much ,from my junior year,I began to orgnize a literature club in the university,and made a briefing every two months.

One weekend,we had some kinds of party ,and invited some folk singers in the school and young artist.

I asked Franscine ,if she was free .She seemed surprized at the beginning,but I was sincere,at last she said,"Maybe I could,every weekend they went to dancing,I am really feeling humdrum now."

Dancing was very popular in the university.BUt I seldom went to there.I only liked Disco a little,but far from a fan,and I was blind in social dance,frankly,even the Waltz,the most simple one,I didn't know how to pace it at all.

the club party was on a lawn.Liao was there ,too.We sat in a round.

Franscine wore a beautiful skirt and leaned on me quietly.

At that time,Liao had got some fame on singing in the university But everybody thought he was wasting his time.

I said to Franscine ,"look,this is our star in the future."And smiled slightly.
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As I knew ,it was a good way to chase beautiful girls by playing guitar.At least, it could be seen in the reality that many girls were the crazy fans of music star.

I read a poem i wrote ,whose name was <One day>
"One day I went through the crossover,
seeing some people observing the dark sky,
I said,if you look for by heart,the shining star could be found

One day I went through the sunset,
they led me to see the galaxy,
at last I saw many shooting stars,
at a night in the winter

One day I went through here again,
seeing some people sitting and singing,
with some smiles on their faces,
which made me feel warm and meloncholy."

And Liao palyed a song,with the name of <the marriage on a paper>.

I couldn't remember it clearly,but that was a good piece.After he finnished singing,we applauded together.

it alluded some kinds of person ,they didn't love very much with another,but they married,signed the nuptial contract on the paper.on the other hand,it talked the precise realationship and ambivelent meaning in our social culture.

the song was exquisite.and after the party finnished,when I accompanyed Franscine returning to her dodging place,I still thought of it.

"Do you think marriage has some kinds of meaning?" I said.

"I don't know ,but marriage is important in one's life."Franscine answered me softly.

I nodded in silent.

"YOur classmate,he is very interesting,I don't mean his song,but his appearance."Franscine suddernly laughed with gladness,looking up to me.

I said,"what?"

She said,"I noticed he always dug his nostril,now and then.hehe..."

I was amused by Franscine's words.And said,"many persons have this habbit."
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Really a good storyteller, GreatJiim.
I read all these pieces at one time and was arrested by what you told.
i expect your posts.
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Wonderful story!!
All of us are waiting for your next !!
I think you made me miss my college school!! Something never forget,the ground,the classroom, my bedroom and desk.especially is roommate!!!
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I am sorry,I just left Beijing and delayed the story.Whatever,i am back . :D
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The autumn was very beautiful and not cold.

I asked Franscine,"What thing you ever did made you feel proud of?"

"let me think."Franscine answered.

"I guess it was that when I was in the middle school.One day in the classroom,before the Math class was open.the teacher found the blackboard was full of wriitern words,and nobody was going to clean it.the time for the beginning of class had passed.And the old teacher with a bald head was in sulk.He repeated ,"if nobody cleaned it for me,I will not teach you this class."

But no one stood up.it was very embarassing.At last,I steped out and went forward and erased the words on the blackboard."

"you are remarkable!"I said to Franscine.

"Really?"SHe was in a little shy.

"absolutely."I said in positive.

"I like to hear your applaud."She smiled in naughty.

"If I were you ,I couldn't do that,although I knew I should do."I smiled in regret.

"BUt that's an ordinary thing.isn't worthy to mention."Franscine tried to console me.
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We said goodbye before we arrived the door of the building where Franscine dodged in.

Franscine said softly to me,"I am happy today."And out of my mind she kissed on my cheek suddernly.After that,she turned around and dissapeared into the building quickly.

I was aghasted at the moment,that was the first time a girl kissed me,although not the touch on the lips,but had shocked me so much.I was flushed in the darkness,but soon my heart was filled with warmth,like a small river had flown into my body.

I turned and left there,after walking for several meters,I began to run in small paces.The leaves on the trees made shadows on the road.in the lightening of the lamps near side.

I tried to think what had happened ,but could not find anything.the only thing I could remember was that Franscine was so lightsome when she kissed on me.
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When I was drenched in the memory,the room door was opened,and Jun came back.

Now Jun was the only person left despite of me in the room.He was preparing to study abroad,to France.

"Hi,What's going on?"I said.I knew he was busy on the matters on visa and the relative things.

"I don't know,maybe they will examine me once again."Jun was a handsome guy.He was active and always looked like the wind for me.

"What are you thinking ,Jinn?you must miss your lover now."Jun said it in a mysterious manner,which made me shy and smiling.

"Maybe...I must be stupid again."I confessed my emotion frankly.

"Stupid?...No,yOur lover was so beautiful .YOu didn't know HOw I was jealous at that time."Jun sitted on the bed and began to gnaw an apple,which I didn't know where came from ."look at my girl friend."

HE pointed a photo on his desk by finger."we knew each other when we were in the 10's .....it's So boring ."

I wanted to laugh ,but suppressed at the beginning.Jun was unctuous ,a little.
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"Sometimes we don't know what we are looking for.Is that?"I answered him.

I knew his girl friend was in Swiss,and studied in HOtel management.BUt why Jun wanted to go to France?I didn't know.

I remembered the song writtern by U2,<but I am still haven't found what I am looking for>.

"I guess I know what I am looking for."Jun said," looking for money of course."He adds.

"You are looking for beauty in France,hahah."I answered him.

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But The story between Franscine and me had already ended,when Jun went out again,I went into my memory again.

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Franscine had became a junior student ,and I would graduate also.We didn't meet often,since I was busy on the study,and my grandmother passed away in those days.I went back to my hometown.Grandmother was very kind to me before.And I was sorry to listen the news.When I came back to school,I found I was so lonely in these years.ANd sometimes I couldn't understand what happened around me.The society was changing every day.And the leader Dengxiaoping ,who now said "development was the hard reason",had made the society into desire-running .
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I looked out of the window,and stepped onto the balcony,the night had came....

In the last year of my undergraduate study,My classmates were busy and detached than before.I began to write essays and little story,not engaged in poem again.

I picked up some pieces of my writings and sent out to the newspaper and magzine.some were published,and made me happy .

I could earn money by my hand!I was satisfied with this progress,and one day I asked Franscine out,that's the christmas evening.

Every year when the Christmas day came,there would be a grand dancing party hold in the university.the name was called as "spree".

Liao ,the singer ,who now rented a house out of the school gardern,looked like a lunar.sometimes we met in the dinning hall.he asked me what I was doing.I showed him an anthology of english novels.I knew he had given up the literature.

Franscine looked like more mature ,I said to her.I was writing now,and had just received a piece of reward from a magzine.She smiled and said loudly in careless."One day when you wrote novel ,don't forget to write me as the character ."I nodded to her.With the big music sound in my ears.I could only nodded to her.

At that time Leixiao was also falling into love with a girl of the computer science department.
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That night I wanted to say "I love you"to Franscine,but at last I didn't do it.

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Time passed quickly,winter ended.We had a programme ,to give us a chance to travel to the south of China.I released myself from the city ,and enjoyed the natural beautiful scenary.
Hai nan island was so beautiful and I was intoxicated .Like arriving into a world of fairy tale.

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Standing on the balcony,I looked down and saw a couple of students was talking under the lamp.I decided to go down and have a cup of drink.

The weather was hot,although in the evening it was balmy in temperature.
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i asked a cool drink and satisfied myself into the seat ,now it was the summer night.I liked to sit now ,seeing the sparse students went here and there.I knew the time left for me to enjoy the school time had been limited.

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Persons were strange,they chased what they couldn't get sometimes.but neglected something easy.

As like me,I was ever chased by a girl who studied in the news and media department.She was also good-looking,but our relationship was transient and delayed on the surface from beginning to the end.

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I took a sip,Franscine's appearance arose in my brain once again.
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That was in my first year as a graduate student.Franscine made a call to me one day.

I was curious for what happened.Since she seldom called me .It was always my things.

It was in the winter.she told me in the telephone that If I needed a subject on the writing.

I said "yes",to be honest,I was preparing to write something new ,but had no fresh story in my brain.So I went out at night and to meet Frascine in a cafeteria.We contantly met there,for a cup of tea.and chatted for a while.or sometimes just go over the lessons.

It was snowing,the road was bad for walking in some place.When I arrived there,Frascine had already been there.
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Franscine asked me what I liked to drink,I said a hot chorcolette drink was ok.

Then our conversation began.

She was now in a lawyer office as a practising consultant.That was a programme when who was a senior college student.Franscine ever told me about that.It was a preparation for the futural career.

Their clients was complicated,sometimes was criminal,sometimes was business person.Sounds very stimulating for me sometimes.

She told me in a little exicitement."We had a client recently,who was a mysterious proprietor of an enterprise.They were an architecture design cooperate.
He said they met an intractable thing."

"What is that?"As I knew,the industry of building and engineer was flurishing and with high profit .which made me eager to get the point of the story.
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it is not a short story............... :shok:

ohhhh very long :roll:
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I had noticed that Franscine had got something changed on her behaviour,like she ordered the drink for me.

But I had no time to think of it,at that time.

"The client was a young man.He was an assistant of the firm's manager.Since it was related with commercial secret.He didn't opened his name.He said They signed a contract with a governmental organization to design a building.Since it was very popular to invite architect from Foreign country to design in China.the administrator of the organization invited an architect from USA to design the facade of the building.But let us to draw the detail of the designing inwards the building.At first,that was nothing happened.But at last,one female architect of us,who was a professional and original firm founder,found that the amount of the drawings was far bigger than what they said at first.

The USA architect just designed a facade paper,with the flavor looked like western style and catering the trend.But inwards there are many content like kitchen ,etc,had no definition.

The female architect now hid the discs of drawings,and she said the government organization had behaviour of corruption,refusing to hand out the drawings.
The firm nearly stopped running now.And the administrator,who was also a young man.hastened the firm to finnish the work everday."

Franscine said it in a breath.And after that,she smiled to me.

"Do you think it includes crime or something such as corruption?"I said it ,as like asking myself.

"YOu look like the doctor Watson in the Holmes story now."Franscine said it and took the drink,which made her look like a professional lawyer.

"So what will you suggest the client to do?"I asked her.
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"I don't know.Frankly say,I sympthize the architect.But she also had her own fault.It is difficult to arbitrate,since they had sign the contract."Franscine said.

"So why do you want me to listen the story?"I asked her.

"I guess it could be a material for your literature writing."She smiled in puerility.

"The female architect can accuse the administrator."I said in calm.

"But where is the proof?"Franscine reacted quickly.

"The disc of drawings ."I answered.
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When we said goodbye that night,Franscine said she was feeling a little cold.

And I embraced her .

Several days later,SHe told me my words were advicable,when the firm declared preparing to charge the administrator , the government organization confessed their crime quickly and apologized to the architect,returning back the money they had misappropriated.The firm then retracted the charge.

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Now Franscine was in the forgein country,I hoped she was good at living and studying.

the evening was even late now.I retraced my story between Franscine and me,she was such a good girl.

Before she left China,I got meeting with her,I asked her why she didn't want to leave when we were in the forthcoming rain that day on the volleyball playground.She said she still hadn't passed a ball for me.She liked to see me jumping and smashing .I was moved by her words and tears dropped down from my eyes out of control.(over)
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boy.. greatJim is really a writer..... i'm enjoying this. :mrgreen:
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francine wrote:boy.. greatJim is really a writer..... i'm enjoying this. :mrgreen:
really?Francine,thank you.I would like to send you some gift,how about chopstick,please tell me your mailing-address. :) :) :)
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The topic is <Franscine>.
(-----I just want to have a look of the great ocean.)
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That's a little strange that only Francine replyed the story at last.Where is the audience at the beginning? :P :P :P

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:mrgreen: may be they're just busy reading at your stories.... :mrgreen:
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francine wrote::mrgreen: may be they're just busy reading at your stories.... :mrgreen:
You really think that? :lol: :lol: OK,I will tell Francine some secret,I will write another one. :D
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greatJim wrote:
francine wrote::mrgreen: may be they're just busy reading at your stories.... :mrgreen:
You really think that? :lol: :lol: OK,I will tell Francine some secret,I will write another one. :D
good! can't wait for another one. ;)
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francine wrote:
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francine wrote::mrgreen: may be they're just busy reading at your stories.... :mrgreen:
You really think that? :lol: :lol: OK,I will tell Francine some secret,I will write another one. :D
good! can't wait for another one. ;)
Francine,I had no idea. :mrgreen: :P

My name is Mr.Green. :lol:

I would like to send you a neckcloth now. :)
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greatJim wrote:Francine,I had no idea. :mrgreen: :P

My name is Mr.Green. :lol:

I would like to send you a neckcloth now. :)
neckcloth? ???
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Mr. Green??? :mrgreen:
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