My first poem

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:27 pm

I just said I was not good at poem, but guys encouraged me to try write some poems. here is my poem. here you go!

The Life

When we feel hungry,
we have to get something to eat;
When we feel tired,
we have to go to bed;
When we eat too much food,
we have to go to toilet;
.......

then, what if we need to communicate with our friends?
oh, we can post something here!

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:30 pm

Hahahah!!!!!

100% Redrose!!!!

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:31 pm

Guys! I know this is a VERY BAD poem!

If you think it really sucks, please don't kick me out!

I swear I would never post any poem here!

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:33 pm

Dixie wrote:Hahahah!!!!!

100% Redrose!!!!

thanks Dixie for your generosity!

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:34 pm

Nooo!!! please, do!!!

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:36 pm

ok, thanks dixie, I will! as long as you guys will not feel sick in reading my poems

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Sat Oct 23, 2004 2:40 pm

We won't

_Arale_ · Post by **_Arale_** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 6:10 am

Redrose, it is not bad at all. You are telling the truth that no one talks about.I like your poems. Great!!!!!

_Arale_

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 10:17 am

haha! thanks Arlae!

francine · Post by **francine** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 1:51 pm

that's a nice one redrose! it's nice,really! :D keep posting!

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Mon Oct 25, 2004 2:02 pm

haha! I just thank you guys so much! you see, I posted a "poem" here, and I had never thought the so-called poem would be popular! and yes, I will keep posting!

_Arale_ · Post by **_Arale_** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 1:53 pm

yesssssssss ! keep making poem,Redrose! I am your fan!

I am waiting for your next one.

_Arale_

RedRose · Post by **RedRose** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 2:02 pm

thanks, dear Arale...

you are the only fan of mine so far! so I would compose some nice poems for my fan