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autumn04
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by autumn04 » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:19 am
I STAND IN THE RAIN
MY HEART HAS A PAIN
I LOVE MY FRIEND :(
AND IT NEVER ENDS :(
Unknownsu
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by Unknownsu » Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:52 am
Nice concise little poem. I think you could expand a bit but that's my own opinion...Well done!
RedRose
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by RedRose » Thu Oct 28, 2004 8:44 pm
Unknownsu wrote: Nice concise little poem. I think you could expand a bit but that's my own opinion...Well done!
teacher, you are always generous to give your compliments to other people..
contrary, you are always stingy to praise me...
what a strict teacher you are
Last edited by RedRose on Fri Oct 29, 2004 6:02 am, edited 1 time in total.
Dixie
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by Dixie » Thu Oct 28, 2004 10:59 pm
Who is Unknownzu? :D
RedRose
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by RedRose » Fri Oct 29, 2004 1:45 am
honey, Unknowsu is my first internet english teacher from Canada. but he is a banana. I mean, his parents are chinese and they used to live in vietnam.
Dixie, as you did, Unknowsu taught me english so much. however, he is a very strict teacher! he always threatened to expel me!
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by Dixie » Fri Oct 29, 2004 9:15 am