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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 11:44 am
by Lee
Nice poem....thats great...

You seem to eager to know about love Babycricket?? :wink:

Re: SUMMER LOVE

Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 2:28 pm
by francine
babycricket wrote:The sweet, rustic smell of the rain
Fills my nose, my head and my brain
The springtime shower soaks my dress
And toes tingle with a grassy caress
The beauty of this day is lost to me
As the deaf man hears not the melody
For all the Nature's wonders seem so dim
When I am here standing next to him
actually, i think this should be posted in the poem's forum instead. this is a nice poem. but should be under the appropiate forum. you could repost it there so that we could ask one of our moderators here to delete it or better yet to move this topic to the poem's forum. :wink: HELLO THERE MODERATORS!!!!!!! :wink: :wink: :wink:

Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 10:10 pm
by Dixie
mmmmmmmm

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Image

Ok I'm moving it :D

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 9:18 am
by Dixie
Image Always at your disposal ;)

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:37 pm
by francine
hey! i knew we could count on our moderators here. :wink:
you're really great! Image

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:40 pm
by Dixie
Hahaha look who's also fond of smileys! :D

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:41 pm
by francine
Dixie wrote:Hahaha look who's also fond of smileys! :D
yeah... i'm really enjoying it. Image Image

Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:48 pm
by RedRose
yeah, this poem is really great!
on comparison with my poems, babycricket's poem is so romantic and decent!

No wonder that my teacher wanted to expel me!

I should learn to write peoms well from babycricket, in that case, two teachers of mine, Unknownsu and Dixie, will keep me...