My dream! (other version)

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RedRose

My dream! (other version)

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when I learn driving,
I no more crash into the roadblock.

when I laugh,
my laughter no more scares the surrounding people.

when I surf on internet,
my parents no more urge me to go to bed.

at the age of 80,
there are still men chasing me.

at the age of 90,
my eyes are good enough to identify the person, who is chasing me, is a man or a woman.

at the age of 95,
I can still post my posts here!
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GREAT!!!!!!!!! ImageImageImageImage
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thanks honey, you always encourage me so much!

under your encouragement, I will become a decent poet in the future!
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RedRose wrote:thanks honey, you always encourage me so much!

under your encouragement, I will become a decent poet in the future!
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;)
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RedRose wrote:when I learn driving,
I no more crash into the roadblock.

when I laugh,
my laughter no more scares the surrounding people.

when I surf on internet,
my parents no more urge me to go to bed.

at the age of 80,
there are still men chasing me.

at the age of 90,
my eyes are good enough to identify the person, who is chasing me, is a man or a woman.

ahahaha, than continue, when 100 age, 105 age? what can still u do??
-tahrer-

at the age of 95,
I can still post my posts here!
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Post by francine »

great job redrose!!!!!!!!! :wink: :wink: :wink: :D
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Post by chemist »

:D Well done Rose :wink:
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Post by mr_Love »

nice from you redrose

hope more from ya
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thanks guys for your encouragements. all ur encouragements will drive me confident. I will take an effort to compose some scatological poems :mrgreen:
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Yes Yes Yesssss!!!!!!!
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