The Substance of My Intoxication

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The Substance of My Intoxication

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Pity, pity, pity
My life is such a pity
Betrayed to the very end
By my lover and best friend

Lonely, lonely, lonely
Is this path to uncertainty
No stranger to become friends with
No friend to share my woes with

Love, love, love
Still I feign for this very substance
That once threatened my existence
In a four year intoxication
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Post by chemist »

Its really nice
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:shock:
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Post by francine »

that's a nice one Geosgroup1. i just hope you're fine now. ;)
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