In the Pit of Loneliness

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GEOSGroup1
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In the Pit of Loneliness

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Down here, in the pit of loneliness
I stand amidst in great remorse
Lost and confused in the whirlpool of life,
I cry out loud and scream for help,
Which came then left me here again
Now I'm losing my strength and sanity,
I feel so sorry, yet I feel so angry
I wish to get out of here, but then I thought,
"Is there something for me up there?
Is there someone who's anxiously waiting?"
All I see is total darkness and silence
I can't find hope in any corner
Tears roll down my cheeks and
Soon, I'll close my eyes, and then
Wait, an wait . . . Wait 'till the
Sun shines on this pit again.
My Life is like a Loaded Gun
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wwwwoooooowwwwwww.... you're really such a talented one. ;)
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