Eternally

Add your poems, essays and short stories here. Please do not post work by other writers.

Moderator: EC

Post Reply
User avatar
Lee
Member
Posts: 18
Joined: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:51 pm
Status: Learner of English
Location: DPR.Korea

Eternally

Post by Lee »

It gets harder every day to live without you,
And when I think of you,
I know it’ll never be true.
You’ll never feel the same for me,
The way I’ll feel eternally.

The feelings I have,
You’ll never know.
Cause my love for you,
Continues to grow.

If you could only feel the way I feel,
You’d know my love for you is real.
I’ll feel this way for years and years,
But you’ll never be here to dry my tears.

I cry each and every night,
Even though it doesn’t feel right.
I pray someday you’ll feel for me,
The love I’ll have for you eternally.
By Lee ;)
User avatar
Dixie
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 3836
Joined: Fri Jul 02, 2004 2:08 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: Catalunya

Post by Dixie »

So beautiful ImageImageImageImageImageImage
User avatar
Shahid
Member
Posts: 33
Joined: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:03 am
Location: Pakistan

Post by Shahid »

hey lee i love you and i have same feeling for you that you have for me .
Shahid Javed
shahidkayani@msn.com

Legends Never Die So I Am Alive
ebilly
Member
Posts: 17
Joined: Sun Dec 12, 2004 5:04 am

Post by ebilly »

i like that poem...
is that song or just poem???
it's more like a song .. don't you think so?
User avatar
Lee
Member
Posts: 18
Joined: Sun Sep 05, 2004 10:51 pm
Status: Learner of English
Location: DPR.Korea

Post by Lee »

Hey Ebilly..
Thanks for the replay....and its not a song....i wrote it ;)
User avatar
Shahid
Member
Posts: 33
Joined: Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:03 am
Location: Pakistan

Post by Shahid »

ebilly. lee wrote this poem for me actully she want to show
how much she love her husband i mean me. :P
Shahid Javed
shahidkayani@msn.com

Legends Never Die So I Am Alive
Ali Al-Majnooni
Member
Posts: 10
Joined: Thu Nov 04, 2004 11:51 pm
Location: Saudi Arabia

yeah

Post by Ali Al-Majnooni »

Lee,

It's a wonderful poem. Believe me.
Keep it up.
It is always a good thing to devote your weapon, here your pen, to help establish real peace on this Earth. I am sure we can make it. Am not I right?
Post Reply