HURT IS A FEELING

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_Arale_

HURT IS A FEELING

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HURT IS A FEELING

Hell is not a place indeed
But hurt is surely a feeling
When your Mom beats you
You feel hurtful
When you get headache
You feel hurtful
They are phisical hurts
When your friend leaves you
You feel hurtful
When you and your lover fall apart
You feel hurtful
They are spritual hurts
The first kind may be cured
but the second may stay forever in your heart
Hell is not a place
But being hurted is like being in hell. ;) :mrgreen:

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Last edited by _Arale_ on Thu Dec 30, 2004 5:53 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Lee »

hey Arale
Nice poem....i really love yours.......Its so comprehensable.

You are right ..but your poem is your poem and mine is mine

All poems have its uniqness ;)
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