Birthday Present

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InLove
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Very sensational!
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Nice poem. Congratulations! :)
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Admiral wrote:Plushhearts say that I love you, but not from my heart.
Poems say that I love you, but with rhymed words.
Roses say that I love you, but roses fade.
Jewelries are only metals, romantic novels the luck of others.
So I give you my heart, all I know about love,
and what you are to me
I wish somebody dedicated a poem like that for me! :oops:
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thank you so much Inlove, Xkalibur, and Oriani! O&O :lol:
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hello sweetheart

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I know that you gave her everything....
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So simple, I want an...expensive notebook in my birthday.(I that so greedy)
Hi everybody, I'm a new visitor of this page. I want every people friendly with me :D :) :? :lol:
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