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Postby Elba » Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:57 pm

Great, you began a story, and after that you began another?' or is the same, one story into another. Sorry but I lost.
About what I´ve read, it is in good literary mod. But IMHO I don´t see a conection between first and seceond.

Who Am I to critices you?? the only thing I do is ask your for an explanation.
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Postby Krisi » Sun Dec 16, 2007 8:46 am

The flow of the story suddenly became so unclear. It just puzzled me! :roll:
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Re: Vase

Postby denvinbo » Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:44 am

What will I say :?: :?: :?: :?:
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children
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Postby mybikiny » Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:45 am

Great story, GJ. hoping you make it better. i thought you a writter :D
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Re: Vase

Postby denvinbo » Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:45 am

Well, there's nothing to do........ :D :D :D :D
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Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 7:20 am

"Don't think twice before you listen to your heart. I will think thrice!" it`s wrong .I prefer to say "Don`t think before you listen to your heart I`ll follow it directly. The first love is the true love and the first look is the innocent look .
our life is like a night mare
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