EnglishClub ESL Forums

Posted: **Thu Sep 27, 2007 10:57 pm**

Great, you began a story, and after that you began another?' or is the same, one story into another. Sorry but I lost.
About what I´ve read, it is in good literary mod. But IMHO I don´t see a conection between first and seceond.

Who Am I to critices you?? the only thing I do is ask your for an explanation.

Posted: **Sun Dec 16, 2007 8:46 am**

The flow of the story suddenly became so unclear. It just puzzled me!

Posted: **Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:44 am**

What will I say

Posted: **Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:45 am**

Great story, GJ. hoping you make it better. i thought you a writter :D

Posted: **Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:45 am**

Well, there's nothing to do........ :D :D :D :D

Posted: **Wed Feb 13, 2008 7:20 am**

"Don't think twice before you listen to your heart. I will think thrice!" it`s wrong .I prefer to say "Don`t think before you listen to your heart I`ll follow it directly. The first love is the true love and the first look is the innocent look .

EnglishClub ESL Forums

Vase

Re: Vase

Re: Vase

Re: Vase

Re: Vase