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letsjam
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by letsjam » Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:48 am
The more I hear doves cry, the less I want to fly.
The more I hear your sigh, the less I wanna smile.
The feeling so strong –
It may be near when it seems so far,
But I will leave a trial where there is no path.
Snapdragon
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by Snapdragon » Wed Jun 28, 2006 4:50 pm
Hey,
this sounds really good - you should publish it :D
Did you made this image yourself, too?
JJJ
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by JJJ » Thu Sep 14, 2006 9:20 am
it is a perfect poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
letsjam
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by letsjam » Thu Sep 14, 2006 9:51 am
JJJ wrote:
it is a perfect poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww thank you :)
pride
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by pride » Mon Sep 18, 2006 7:30 pm
:) :) :) :)
swan
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by swan » Mon Sep 18, 2006 10:32 pm
it's nice poem
i like it
keep going
Oriani
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by Oriani » Tue Sep 19, 2006 12:37 am
Nice image!
InLove
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by InLove » Sun Dec 03, 2006 11:23 am
Either nice voice or nice picture :P
babara
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by babara » Sun Dec 03, 2006 11:37 am
I really like a picture!
Dexter
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by Dexter » Sat Dec 09, 2006 7:47 am
nice poetm... i like it :)
but i can't see the picture to comment about it :(
Admiral
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by Admiral » Sat Dec 09, 2006 8:34 am
Dexter
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by Dexter » Sun Dec 10, 2006 6:18 am
no, i still can't see... seems the website is among the sites which are blocked by my isp :(
thanks anyway, Admiral
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by Admiral » Sun Dec 10, 2006 2:23 pm
you will be disappointed if you see it, very primitive cartoon
Dexter
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by Dexter » Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:39 am
really?
Admiral
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by Admiral » Mon Dec 11, 2006 4:30 pm
yeah, a bad painted cartoon girl looking to the sky crying, but you only see the mouth and the nose, and a round chin with an open mouth and a nose.
MandyWang
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by MandyWang » Mon Dec 11, 2006 5:06 pm
It warms my hurt.
Dexter
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by Dexter » Tue Dec 12, 2006 7:52 am
Admiral wrote: yeah, a bad painted cartoon girl looking to the sky crying, but you only see the mouth and the nose, and a round chin with an open mouth and a nose.
thanks for the description, Admiral :D
(((Edu)))
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by (((Edu))) » Wed Dec 13, 2006 1:43 pm
Hey guy, are you the new "Eric Clapton"?