Tears in Heaven

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Tears in Heaven

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The more I hear doves cry, the less I want to fly.
The more I hear your sigh, the less I wanna smile.
The feeling so strong –
It may be near when it seems so far,
But I will leave a trial where there is no path.

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Post by Snapdragon »

Hey,
this sounds really good - you should publish it :D
Did you made this image yourself, too?
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Post by JJJ »

:roll:
it is a perfect poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :lol:
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Post by letsjam »

JJJ wrote::roll:
it is a perfect poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :lol:

awww thank you :)
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Post by pride »

:) :) :) :)
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Post by swan »

it's nice poem
i like it
keep going :lol:
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Post by Oriani »

Nice image!
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Post by InLove »

Either nice voice or nice picture :P
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Post by babara »

I really like a picture!
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Post by Dexter »

nice poetm... i like it :)
but i can't see the picture to comment about it :(
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Post by Admiral »

Can you see it here? Image If not please go to http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9315/rainydayjf3.gif
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Post by Dexter »

no, i still can't see... seems the website is among the sites which are blocked by my isp :(
thanks anyway, Admiral
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Post by Admiral »

you will be disappointed if you see it, very primitive cartoon
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really? :!:
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Post by Admiral »

yeah, a bad painted cartoon girl looking to the sky crying, but you only see the mouth and the nose, and a round chin with an open mouth and a nose.
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I like it a lot

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It warms my hurt.
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Post by Dexter »

Admiral wrote:yeah, a bad painted cartoon girl looking to the sky crying, but you only see the mouth and the nose, and a round chin with an open mouth and a nose.
thanks for the description, Admiral :D
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Post by (((Edu))) »

Hey guy, are you the new "Eric Clapton"?
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