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Fly From The Inside...

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Fly From The Inside...

Postby letsjam » Thu Jun 29, 2006 4:07 am

"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"


Fly From The Inside


The bright light of blind star in the end of tunnel…
And I’m striving to that light, I’m running…
…to my only shelter from the storm.
I’m running away from the silent port where
the waves of life became
too wild.
There, in port, I was unseen, alone and unheard.
So many people…
Have no things to do together.
Dreams and hopes. Possession.
Memories and smiles. Promises…
Where have you gone?
We talk about what’s happening, who’s doing what…
But everything has gone.
I won’t come back but maybe I’ll stay with you.
Don’t cry. I’ll be the light, I’ll be the pain,
I’ll be fire and ashes, winter and summer…
Far and near, short and endless, evil and angel,
Quick and awkward…
The eternal circle.
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Postby Admiral » Mon Aug 14, 2006 11:11 pm

wow did you write this on your own?
hey, this is really huge, I had to read several times thorugh it to understand the meaning.
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Postby letsjam » Tue Aug 15, 2006 2:25 am

thank you :D

yeah i really wrote this poem, on my own how you said. i always write anything - poems, essays, lyrics :)
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good attempt

Postby watan » Sat Oct 07, 2006 1:37 am

thanks a lot for ur nice attempt at poetry writing. indeed, i believe that if a poem is to carry a specific meaning no longer deserves to be called a poem. Meanings are chains and poems should never be chained. Poems should "be" and not "mean".
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Postby Oriani » Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:49 pm

Oh.. I can't even write like you.. That's so NICE :P
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Re: Fly From The Inside...

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:34 am

Oriani dont say I cant u must try and try untill u do sth.
our life is like a night mare
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