for my beautiful fiancee

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Admiral

for my beautiful fiancee

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I used to hear songs of love
recalling in my ears
the voices remind me, you will be safe
as I looked in your eyes

Girl, your voice like heavenly smile
I never knew what to say
only wish you, to stay a while
near me, till the stars fade away

Sometimes my mood can't be low
no matter what I do
in such times I always know
My mind has been left in you
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Post by fortminor »

good for your beautiful fiancee :lol:
nice poem! 8)
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Aww, Admiral, what a cute poem! 8) *grabs her guitar and starts to sing with a husky voice* :lol:
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thank you fortminor and Anahita.
Last edited by Admiral on Wed Aug 09, 2006 11:11 am, edited 1 time in total.
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It were lonely summer winds
Flew by the window, tried to bind
The memories, these months
Since my plane leaded homewards

How you combed your hair with fingers
When you touched the bloom of flower
The thoughts of that days
You beside me, the flush in your face

A boy in my age often dreams
Imagining a girl who fits to him
This must be the truth
You are the girl in my dreams
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Songtext "Magic of home" witten by Ciga (feat. Charles Simmons)



For you my feelings are true
the sound of my heart never apart from you
discover a place where there's nothing more to face
cause the magic of home is true
yes, the magic of home is true with you.

First time, I saw your smile
and just for a while I felt this can't be real
this love is strong, give it a place to belong
cause the magic of home is true
yes, the magic of home is true with you.

A place where our hearts beat as one
covered with feelings, emotions so strong
the magic of home makes me free
it's everything to me.

Go on and let it begin
find yourself in two arms that hold you tight
believe in me, you are my destiny
cause the magic of home is true
yes, the magic of home is true with you.

A place where our hearts beat as one
covered with feelings, emotions so strong
the magic of home makes me free
it's everything to me.

With you, my day dreams come true
no word I can spell can tell my love to you
so take my hand, keep it and don't let this end
cause the magic of home is true
yes, the magic of home is true with you.
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Post by Seafarer »

oh how nice..i wonder whether my fiance would write a poem for me!
Even my bf hardly writes a letter!!
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When I stayed awake just to hear a phrase of you
When I lay on bed I heard the words from you
As we walked along the street
Girl I memorised each word

Long ago I dreamed of you
Now I know I can't let you go
Because at the time not long ago
You showed me that love won't go

Now I'm like being next to you
Although I know this can't be true
But you know I will be thinking of you
whenever you do
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Like the songs of bird we hear in the spring
Or the slight of wish we make before night
Are the moments where you make me sing
Or the moment I wished to hold you tight

How the water belongs to the earth
Like the drops of falling rain
Outside the window, I want to be near
Beside you, girlfriend

Like roaring we hear under the waterfall
Or the moon following after the sun
The wishes won't stop, not at all
And you know my heart will go on
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Post by Admiral »

And all this I feel for you
But why, why do you always stay cold?
How can I give my love to you
If you're feeling cold inside
Your voice always low and tide
My heart feels being lied
Can I see you near my side?
I know you do and I will do
I worry, so worry, what could be told
To you my love, not to you
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Post by Oriani »

Hi Admiral, I'm glad you write such gorgeous poems.. Wow, I didn't even know about your Fiancee! :)
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