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ginny
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TearHere wrote:
ginny wrote: When I wake up
from nightmares
when I feel cold
in winter air

I think of you..
nice!! :D love this part.. i can relate :D
Thanks so much. I like the second part. :)

When snow falls
when tears drop
when flowers wither
when life becomes dark
when sorrow fills my heart

..........

I dream of you
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:D
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Post by sorush »

Your poem is sooooooooooooo nice I wish you could save your idea for eternity
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Post by (((Edu))) »

Ginny,
congratulations for your poem.
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Post by Ms.A.Z »

Wonderful ginny!
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Post by Sunnypk »

Very good
It's too wonderful poem
Nice work
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Post by fadi »

nice work ginny.,.really nice
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