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ginny
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by ginny »
"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"
When I wake up
from nightmares
when I feel cold
in winter air
...........
I think of you
When snow falls
when tears drop
when flowers wither
when life becomes dark
when sorrow fills my heart
..........
I dream of you
Though...
you are not here
you were away
from my heart
in my fancy
you're alive
forever
.........
Like everytime
I think of you...
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Dexter
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by Dexter »
nice ginny... i really liked it... :)
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Admiral
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by Admiral »
heyhey, really good poem, let's the heart float, like on a river or something.
I like it, too
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Ponlakit
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by Ponlakit »
I like it.
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ginny
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by ginny »
Thanks ya!!!
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JJJ
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by JJJ »
i think you are a perfect girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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nicholascute
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by nicholascute »
Ginny,
It seems you would be good POETESS one day..
Where are u from?
Myself from India...
cheers,
N
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swan
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by swan »
woow ginny
it's wonderful poem
i like it too
with my best regards
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ginny
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by ginny »
Thanks so much, JJJ, nicholascute, swan. :D
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TearHere
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by TearHere »
ginny wrote:
When I wake up
from nightmares
when I feel cold
in winter air
I think of you..
nice!! :D love this part.. i can relate :D
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ginny
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by ginny »
TearHere wrote:ginny wrote:
When I wake up
from nightmares
when I feel cold
in winter air
I think of you..
nice!! :D love this part.. i can relate :D
Thanks so much. I like the second part. :)
When snow falls
when tears drop
when flowers wither
when life becomes dark
when sorrow fills my heart
..........
I dream of you
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Vega
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by Vega »
:D
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sorush
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by sorush »
Your poem is sooooooooooooo nice I wish you could save your idea for eternity
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(((Edu)))
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by (((Edu))) »
Ginny,
congratulations for your poem.
Kisses
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Ms.A.Z
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by Ms.A.Z »
Wonderful ginny!
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Sunnypk
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by Sunnypk »
Very good
It's too wonderful poem
Nice work
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fadi
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by fadi »
nice work ginny.,.really nice