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ginny
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"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"


When I wake up
from nightmares
when I feel cold
in winter air

...........

I think of you

When snow falls
when tears drop
when flowers wither
when life becomes dark
when sorrow fills my heart

..........

I dream of you

Though...
you are not here
you were away
from my heart
in my fancy
you're alive
forever

.........

Like everytime
I think of you...
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Post by Dexter »

nice ginny... i really liked it... :)
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Post by Admiral »

heyhey, really good poem, let's the heart float, like on a river or something.
I like it, too
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Post by Ponlakit »

I like it.
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Post by ginny »

Thanks ya!!!
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i like the poem

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i think you are a perfect girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Post by nicholascute »

Ginny,

It seems you would be good POETESS one day..

Where are u from?

Myself from India...

cheers,
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Post by swan »

woow ginny

it's wonderful poem

i like it too

with my best regards
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Post by ginny »

Thanks so much, JJJ, nicholascute, swan. :D
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ginny wrote: When I wake up
from nightmares
when I feel cold
in winter air

I think of you..
nice!! :D love this part.. i can relate :D
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TearHere wrote:
ginny wrote: When I wake up
from nightmares
when I feel cold
in winter air

I think of you..
nice!! :D love this part.. i can relate :D
Thanks so much. I like the second part. :)

When snow falls
when tears drop
when flowers wither
when life becomes dark
when sorrow fills my heart

..........

I dream of you
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:D
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Post by sorush »

Your poem is sooooooooooooo nice I wish you could save your idea for eternity
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Post by (((Edu))) »

Ginny,
congratulations for your poem.
Kisses
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Post by Ms.A.Z »

Wonderful ginny!
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Post by Sunnypk »

Very good
It's too wonderful poem
Nice work
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Post by fadi »

nice work ginny.,.really nice
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