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Vega
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You'll see...!

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Look at the sky, look at the sea,
Look at the oceans,
What do you see ?...
Look at the mountains, look at the trees,
What do you see ?...
Look at the nature, look at eternity...
What do you see?...
Look at a people, look at a history...
Look at your sins, look at your dreams,
What do you see ?...
Look for an answer,...
And...you will see.

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27/10/2006
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Post by Dixie »

OK WHAT will we see? :lol:
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Post by Vega »

I don't know what exactly you'll see. :D

i'm asking myself,...to realize this life.
i like existentialism.
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Post by fadi »

nice poem.,.really
:D
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Post by feanor »

what if we dont like what we see.. better not to look..
nice poem..
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ah...

Post by ansheng »

I see more and more stars... :)
nice poem!
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