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(((Edu)))
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by (((Edu))) »
"I love two things
You and the flowers
The flowers for some time
And you for all my life"
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fadi
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by fadi »
really nice words.,.,also i like it because its short :D
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(((Edu)))
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by (((Edu))) »
Thanks, Fadi!
fadi wrote:really nice words.,.,also i like it because its short :D
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Dixie
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by Dixie »
Very sweet although it lacks the rhyme
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Admiral
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by Admiral »
good poems don't need rhyme
good work
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Dexter
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by Dexter »
short and nice :D
