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shelly
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by shelly » Sun Dec 10, 2006 11:22 am
On Christmas Eve, people were busy with decorating their houses. Justin sent a gift to Linda as before. Linda gazed at this gift –a beautiful bag with smooth surface, different colors of strings and round decorations on it. Linda asked Justin “Did you make one for yourself?” “Sure! I’ll make one for myself this year!” “How could you make so many pretty stuffs for me every year by yourself?” Linda asked. “I’ll show you!” Justin guided Linda to the basement. As Linda walked downstairs, she screamed. She saw many young girls’ dead body hanging everywhere. Some didn’t have eye, some had no hair and even the skin. She suddenly understood the components of the bag. Linda wanted to run away, but the door was locked. Justin walked toward Linda, holding her hand and said “I’m afraid that you’ll die some day and left me alone. If I make a bag by you then I can take it everywhere forever! Ha!”
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by Admiral » Sun Dec 10, 2006 2:25 pm
uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
fortminor
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by fortminor » Sun Dec 10, 2006 3:44 pm
Admiral wrote: uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19
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by feanor » Sun Dec 10, 2006 5:36 pm
fortminor wrote: Admiral wrote: uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19
yes, read and be careful about your boyfriends.. :)
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by Dexter » Mon Dec 11, 2006 7:22 am
feanor wrote: fortminor wrote: Admiral wrote: uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19
yes, read and be careful about your boyfriends.. :)
good advice! :P
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by fortminor » Mon Dec 11, 2006 9:28 am
ohhhhh :o
so scary...yes,I should be careful.
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by MandyWang » Mon Dec 11, 2006 12:59 pm
I think it's a great story and fabulously. I admire your imaginary a lot.
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by Admiral » Mon Dec 11, 2006 11:30 pm
forough wrote: ohhhhh
so scary...yes,I should be careful.
If God would give us an opening, I will protect you
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by babara » Wed Dec 13, 2006 3:04 am
If God would give us an opening, I will protect you
WOW!!..It sounds so good. 8)
Hmm..this story looks like a horror movie.If it is movie It would be funny and exciting.
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by shelly » Thu Dec 14, 2006 2:33 pm
Admiral wrote: uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
ha!I scared myself while writing!
shelly
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by shelly » Thu Dec 14, 2006 2:35 pm
fortminor wrote: Admiral wrote: uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19
I am 18......
shelly
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by shelly » Thu Dec 14, 2006 2:37 pm
feanor wrote: fortminor wrote: Admiral wrote: uhhh... so scary, we should put an age restriction here
oh wow,am i allowed to read this ? I'm 19
yes, read and be careful about your boyfriends.. :)
hi!I see you again!
Maybe my boyfriend should be careful!(just kidding)
shelly
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by shelly » Thu Dec 14, 2006 2:39 pm
MandyWang wrote: I think it's a great story and fabulously. I admire your imaginary a lot.
thank you! Mandy! I also surprised that I could write this kind of story!
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by fortminor » Thu Dec 14, 2006 3:48 pm
but this story is so far from reality.
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by Vega » Thu Dec 14, 2006 4:58 pm
very pretty story to be THE NICEST POST OF THE MONTH
:) 8)
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by Admiral » Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:05 pm
but this story is so far from reality.
Yeah, real men won't do this. And often this is not the real way to show that you love someone else... It should come with passion
, and connection
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by fortminor » Fri Dec 15, 2006 8:17 am
and another point is how the girl couldn't find out that the bag is strange (maybe bl00dy
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shelly
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by shelly » Sun Dec 17, 2006 3:15 pm
fortminor wrote: but this story is so far from reality.
i am glad it's not the reality!
shelly
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by shelly » Sun Dec 17, 2006 3:22 pm
Admiral wrote: but this story is so far from reality.
Yeah, real men won't do this. And often this is not the real way to show that you love someone else... It should come with passion
, and connection
In fact,this story is ironic. Everybody knows that it's the wrong way to show his love. However, many people hurt their lover because they misunderstood the define of love!
shelly
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by shelly » Sun Dec 17, 2006 3:24 pm
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by fortminor » Sun Dec 17, 2006 6:01 pm
shelly wrote: fortminor wrote: but this story is so far from reality.
i am glad it's not the reality!
lol