Am I glad ? Am I sad ?

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shokin
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Am I glad ? Am I sad ?

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Am I glad ? Am I sad ?
How could I know ?
The same way I cannot laugh,
The same way I can just cry.

I hear so many nice songs,
From Earth and from Sky.
I forget so many mounts under the moon,
Which are full of sparks in the dark.

Am I glad ? Am I sad ?
How could I know ?
I am losing sight,
Without evening light.



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Am I glad ? Am I sad ?
How could I know ?
The same way I cannot laugh,
The same way I can just cry.
I like this. When I try to ask oneself this word It makes feel strange and good together. :D
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Post by Admiral »

wow good poem I like this style (my style, haha)
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I like it. :D
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nice :D
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Post by Sunnypk »

very nice
good job
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Post by fadi »

nice one shokin.,.,.,really nice

keep goin my friend :D
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sweet poem

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I think that your poem " Am I glad? Am I sad? " is a good poem and I'd like to congratulate you on it .
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