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Even black is white

Postby shokin » Thu Dec 28, 2006 4:20 am

"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"

Even black is white

You are more tired than ever.
You have only worked today.
You had just some minutes for rest.
But you'd be more tired when bored.

Your father is ill, your mother is worried.
Your brother drinks too much.
Your sister does not find any job.
But you are healthy and you can study.

Grandfather is ded, grandmother is far away.
Uncle Sam is playing wargames, aunt Glory is playing lottery.
Godfather thinks only about his job. Godmather wants only to be alone.
But you can find the person that you know the best.

Cars make noise, planes break silence.
People shout, scream and howl.
Children cry, worries resound.
But your favourite music will never leave you.

Many people do war, even many more are hungry.
Few people are happy, less are wise.
Nearly everybody is like a sheep, a minority developes consciousness.
But you keeps being optimistic.

Humanity is becoming chaotic.
Earth, nature and space are maltreated.
Is it destiny of our consciousness ?
Or simply a bad dream, a bad trip ?



You cannot say that everything is black and white.
But you cannot either say that black and white do not exist.
Even black is white.
Even in the dark you can find a shark.

If you have the chance to find a star in each of your black clouds,
You are already happy.
Because this star is single
And illuminates everything.



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Postby Oriani » Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:12 pm

Oh!!! Is it about you??? I liked this one :

Your father is ill, your mother is worried.
Your brother drinks too much.
Your sister does not find any job.
But you are healthy and you can study.
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Postby shokin » Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:23 pm

No, don't be afraid. It's fictive. :lol:

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Postby fadi » Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:23 pm

Oriani wrote:Oh!!! Is it about you??? I liked this one :

Your father is ill, your mother is worried.
Your brother drinks too much.
Your sister does not find any job.
But you are healthy and you can study.


me too oriani.,.i like this part too.,.,.,.

thx a lot shokin :D
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Postby Arale » Sat Dec 30, 2006 2:38 am

Wonderful! Shokin! :D Just a question, can you really be happy when you live in such a family and world? :roll:
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Postby fortminor » Sat Dec 30, 2006 1:35 pm

nice poem , It could be guessed it is the nicest post of the month. :)
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congratulations shokin

Postby tikay » Sat Dec 30, 2006 10:57 pm

on your winning the nicest post of the month...thats wonderful!
and no i didn't leave forever, but i found new places i needed to do things in too....
i hope sometimes you will all come and say hi too
me in the new page i've been making in myspace

just checking in to say hello
find me here mostly
http://www.myspace.com/DreamingTK

my e-address changed too...
digincubus@yahoo.

again I am happy for you...nice post!
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Postby shokin » Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:34 pm

Arale wrote:Wonderful! Shokin! :D Just a question, can you really be happy when you live in such a family and world? :roll:


Yes, you can... according to me.

But... I had just said that it was a fiction. :mrgreen:

Nicest poem of the month ? congratulations shokin ! :mrgreen: I just cannot believe it.

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Postby Arale » Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:05 am

shokin wrote:Yes, you can... according to me.


I do agree! :mrgreen:

shokin wrote:Nicest poem of the month ? congratulations shokin ! :mrgreen: I just cannot believe it.
Shokin


LOL! Shokin! Congratulations!:mrgreen:

Anyway, happy new year!:wink:

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Postby Dixie » Thu Jan 04, 2007 9:56 am

Shokin, congratulations! :D
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