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Her Broken Christmas.

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Postby Vega » Sat Jun 02, 2007 7:43 am

Wow, really nice poem (I've just read it). :)

Congratulations!! :D
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Postby jmiya » Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:48 pm

I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .

A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find

hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring
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Postby letsjam » Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:25 am

jmiya wrote: I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .

A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find

hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring


Uhm not rainy afternoon kinda but whatever :] I like this poem...good job!!!
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Re: Her Broken Christmas.

Postby shakespear » Tue Feb 12, 2008 9:43 am

letsjam your poem is active and very good and I want to communicate with you continuouosly.thanks.
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Re: Her Broken Christmas.

Postby letsjam » Tue Feb 12, 2008 11:56 am

:wink:
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Re: Her Broken Christmas.

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:20 am

"She lost her faith in love.
You stabbed her in the heart." these words are fantastic and I like them.
If you want to be left alone to cry, I`ll cry with you in your loneliness .GOOD LUCK . :cry:
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