Her Broken Christmas.

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Nice pic but so sad.... :(
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well it reflects my mood. heh. =/
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and that girl kinda looks like me =]
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letsjam wrote:well it reflects my mood. heh. =/
Why are you sad?
You try to find some friend to talking with you or listen to music but not slow music or sad music or watch a comical movie...I think It may help you from sadness or depression. :)
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Yeah! I think that picture goes with me..!!! :oops:
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babara wrote:
letsjam wrote:well it reflects my mood. heh. =/
Why are you sad?
you can find the answer in a new topic that i just posted. Dancing in front of the mirror to music.
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It sounds not sad yet meditative. Such pondering moments are sometimes quite precious because it helps us what cheerfulness is. Also, I often seat long for letting my mind wandering around beyond all earthly realities.
To my point, the pic you posted is pretty lovely and looks a bit romantic. But if it was either a real pic boy or girl, it would be far more romantic. Right ?
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Lac wrote:It sounds not sad yet meditative. Such pondering moments are sometimes quite precious because it helps us what cheerfulness is. Also, I often seat long for letting my mind wandering around beyond all earthly realities.
To my point, the pic you posted is pretty lovely and looks a bit romantic. But if it was either a real pic boy or girl, it would be far more romantic. Right ?
Excellent!!!!!!!!! :wink:
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Really itis wonderfull and itis magic.
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Wow, really nice poem (I've just read it). :)

Congratulations!! :D
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I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .

A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find

hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring
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jmiya wrote: I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .

A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find

hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring
Uhm not rainy afternoon kinda but whatever :] I like this poem...good job!!!
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letsjam your poem is active and very good and I want to communicate with you continuouosly.thanks.
our life is like a night mare
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:wink:
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"She lost her faith in love.
You stabbed her in the heart." these words are fantastic and I like them.
If you want to be left alone to cry, I`ll cry with you in your loneliness .GOOD LUCK . :cry:
our life is like a night mare
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