Her Broken Christmas.
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It sounds not sad yet meditative. Such pondering moments are sometimes quite precious because it helps us what cheerfulness is. Also, I often seat long for letting my mind wandering around beyond all earthly realities.
To my point, the pic you posted is pretty lovely and looks a bit romantic. But if it was either a real pic boy or girl, it would be far more romantic. Right ?
To my point, the pic you posted is pretty lovely and looks a bit romantic. But if it was either a real pic boy or girl, it would be far more romantic. Right ?
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Excellent!!!!!!!!!Lac wrote:It sounds not sad yet meditative. Such pondering moments are sometimes quite precious because it helps us what cheerfulness is. Also, I often seat long for letting my mind wandering around beyond all earthly realities.
To my point, the pic you posted is pretty lovely and looks a bit romantic. But if it was either a real pic boy or girl, it would be far more romantic. Right ?
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I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .
A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find
hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring
A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find
hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring
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Uhm not rainy afternoon kinda but whatever :] I like this poem...good job!!!jmiya wrote: I dont see any poems in here, anyways here's a little poem for that beautiful picture .
A girl sitting by the window
dreaming,wishing for her prince
in a rainy afternoon
A day of sadness something
I dont wanna have
But if its reality
I wish i'll be just find
hope you like it and I must say the picture is very inspiring
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Re: Her Broken Christmas.
letsjam your poem is active and very good and I want to communicate with you continuouosly.thanks.
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Her Broken Christmas.
"She lost her faith in love.
You stabbed her in the heart." these words are fantastic and I like them.
If you want to be left alone to cry, I`ll cry with you in your loneliness .GOOD LUCK .
You stabbed her in the heart." these words are fantastic and I like them.
If you want to be left alone to cry, I`ll cry with you in your loneliness .GOOD LUCK .
our life is like a night mare