Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind
GOOD BYE
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our life is like a night mare
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Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...
Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]
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Re: GOOD BYE
nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing!
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Re: GOOD BYE
hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye
our life is like a night mare
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Re: GOOD BYE
nice words,but i don't understand others said
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hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye
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Re: GOOD BYE
i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead
we have to live our life freely
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shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
comment plz
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Re: GOOD BYE
so sad but really soooooooo nice,
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hello
thanx my dear friend 4 this lovely comment
thanx my dear friend 4 this lovely comment
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Re: GOOD BYE
hi
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Re: GOOD BYE
Hi!!! it's so sad, actually i hate good bies that's why i said it, hmm yeah nobody wants to say goodbye to his/her love
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Re: GOOD BYE
sad style is not our choice...i think so
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Re: GOOD BYE
i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments
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denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
Yes, I am a girl/female, I don't know you denvinbo!
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I think you'er the best in this club...you wrote so lovely words...full of representative wordsallison wrote:Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
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Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...
Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
congratulations
our life is like a night mare