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Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:38 am
by denvinbo
krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............ :lol:

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:52 pm
by Krisi
denvinbo wrote:
krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... :mrgreen: be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :lol: :P: :lol: !!!

Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............ :lol:
OK! :P

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 2:40 am
by denvinbo
hahaha.......This global will have a monster....:P

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:26 am
by shakespear
Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:59 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!! :mrgreen:

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:23 am
by shakespear
Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 1:25 pm
by denvinbo
Krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!! :mrgreen:
:lol:

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:55 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.
OK! I'll follow. :mrgreen:

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:57 am
by shakespear
Hi .But I don`t think that.

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 11:49 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Hi .But I don`t think that.
What do you mean? :| Are you doubting? :roll:

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 11:24 am
by shakespear
Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 2:05 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
:)

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:27 am
by shakespear
I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 1:27 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.
So far I have no intention to compete with you... :P

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 11:03 am
by shakespear
I think u r really who must cry because y don`t write something creative. goodluck.

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:31 pm
by Hatter
I like short poems.
Better to leave people wishing there was more than otherwise. :D

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 1:09 am
by nemo
hi...i like it...
emmm....can u make a poem about me.....
hehehehe....
:D :D :D

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:15 am
by shakespear
thank u nemo
i can but i need sth about u
good luck

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:17 am
by shakespear
thank u nemo
i can but I need to know sth about u
goos luck

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 4:00 pm
by loola
woow my friend . i like it so much..it's very romantic words..
thanks for ur lines...

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 7:48 am
by shakespear
Hi loola
thanks.
Really u r kind

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 2:43 am
by allison
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 11:07 am
by CybaSumo
nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing! :prof:

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:00 pm
by shakespear
Hi allison
ur poem`s fantastic.Congratulations

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:53 am
by shakespear
hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:21 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:27 pm
by nxswxxg
nice words,but i don't understand others said :cry: :cry: :cry:

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:00 am
by shakespear
hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 9:02 am
by farah
i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:02 pm
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

comment plz

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:38 am
by manar
so sad but really soooooooo nice, :-D

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:50 pm
by shakespear
hello
thanx my dear friend 4 this lovely comment

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:25 am
by shakespear
hi

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:06 am
by Lara
Hi!!! it's so sad, actually i hate good bies that's why i said it, hmm yeah nobody wants to say goodbye to his/her love

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:43 am
by shakespear
sad style is not our choice...i think so

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:05 am
by shakespear
i hope u all be happy
i pray god keep u safe
have nice moments

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2015 2:30 pm
by Krisi
denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi........... :lol:



Yes, I am a girl/female, I don't know you denvinbo!

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2016 11:25 am
by shakespear
wt's the difference???

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:00 am
by shakespear
RENEW OLD POEMS

Re: GOOD BYE

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 9:08 am
by shakespear
allison wrote:
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
……
Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...

Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
I think you'er the best in this club...you wrote so lovely words...full of representative words
congratulations