ENDLESS DAY
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
We must write everything inside our heart .Good luck .
our life is like a night mare
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
Hi . sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .Good luck.
We must throw it out .Good luck.
our life is like a night mare
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
you have something special something different iam wonder your words are very special
i hope you a great future
i hope you a great future
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon
our life is like a night mare
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
Hi .
sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .
Good luck.
sad ,inside our hearts, is great .
We must throw it out .
Good luck.
our life is like a night mare
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
It's a nice poem with a rich meaning.
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
Cool... very cool.
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
hi every one
thanks 4 this comment
and i hope the best times 4 u
i hope we can meet continuously
thanks 4 this comment
and i hope the best times 4 u
i hope we can meet continuously
our life is like a night mare
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
comment plzshakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
when we are in loved we feel we depend on the other person, everthing is around her/him, nice poem Shakespear :)shakespear wrote:My winter always needs your spring
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
thnx friend and hope hear sth new from u ....u have to try new poem....
have good luck
have good luck
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
a very nice poem. Thanks for tirelessly sharing with us your writings.
I still think love is true but, I think I am not just lucky when it comes to love. I guess the definition of true love changes if you will feel hatred and heartaches always.
As of now, I am thinking how life would be without love, care and compassion for one another. Will we still walk with emotion? Will we still see appreciation on one's face? Will we still see the values or meaning of what we do and say? I do hope there still will remain good values for mankind... an endless day indeed.
Good luck to you.
-krisi-
I still think love is true but, I think I am not just lucky when it comes to love. I guess the definition of true love changes if you will feel hatred and heartaches always.
As of now, I am thinking how life would be without love, care and compassion for one another. Will we still walk with emotion? Will we still see appreciation on one's face? Will we still see the values or meaning of what we do and say? I do hope there still will remain good values for mankind... an endless day indeed.
Good luck to you.
-krisi-
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
Yeah, actually i have a new one, i will show u soon, it needs to completed first :D
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
krisi my friend
really ur comment is very strong and holds rich meanings among its words and i do hope u always send comments on our poems to enrich us in addition toour poems....i think u'll add a value to our writings...
thnx 4 this lovely comment
best wishes
really ur comment is very strong and holds rich meanings among its words and i do hope u always send comments on our poems to enrich us in addition toour poems....i think u'll add a value to our writings...
thnx 4 this lovely comment
best wishes
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
hi
i hope u r so happy
i hope u r so happy
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Re: ENDLESS DAY
shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
short poem
and old
our life is like a night mare