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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 7:31 pm
by (((Edu)))
Cool... very cool.

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 1:40 pm
by shakespear
hi every one
thanks 4 this comment
and i hope the best times 4 u
i hope we can meet continuously

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 6:51 pm
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
comment plz

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:51 pm
by Lara
shakespear wrote:My winter always needs your spring
when we are in loved we feel we depend on the other person, everthing is around her/him, nice poem Shakespear :)

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:41 am
by shakespear
thnx friend and hope hear sth new from u ....u have to try new poem....
have good luck

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 10:40 am
by Krisi
a very nice poem. Thanks for tirelessly sharing with us your writings.

I still think love is true but, I think I am not just lucky when it comes to love. I guess the definition of true love changes if you will feel hatred and heartaches always.
As of now, I am thinking how life would be without love, care and compassion for one another. Will we still walk with emotion? Will we still see appreciation on one's face? Will we still see the values or meaning of what we do and say? I do hope there still will remain good values for mankind... an endless day indeed.
Good luck to you.
-krisi-

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:56 pm
by Lara
Yeah, actually i have a new one, i will show u soon, it needs to completed first :D

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:00 am
by shakespear
krisi my friend
really ur comment is very strong and holds rich meanings among its words and i do hope u always send comments on our poems to enrich us in addition toour poems....i think u'll add a value to our writings...
thnx 4 this lovely comment
best wishes

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:57 am
by shakespear
hi
i hope u r so happy

Re: ENDLESS DAY

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:17 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless

short poem
and old