LIVING TOGETHER

Add your poems, essays and short stories here. Please do not post work by other writers.

Moderator: EC

Post Reply
User avatar
LegodeFein
Member
Posts: 44
Joined: Wed Feb 27, 2008 5:48 pm
Status: Learner of English
Location: Russia

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by LegodeFein »

Oh,it's so touching!Well done,Shakespear!!!*THUMBS UP*
User avatar
shakespear
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 973
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: turkey

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by shakespear »

Hi everyone . please don`t cut your comment. Good luck.
our life is like a night mare
User avatar
shakespear
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 973
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: turkey

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by shakespear »

Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
our life is like a night mare
loola
Member
Posts: 22
Joined: Mon Mar 26, 2007 4:00 pm
Status: Learner of English

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by loola »

woow shakespear.. you are a real poet ..
you have a nice world .. i like it so much ..

thank u dear
User avatar
shakespear
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 973
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: turkey

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by shakespear »

thanks dear
I want to hear about u.
ur comment is important for me
bye
our life is like a night mare
User avatar
AlexVlasoff
Member
Posts: 12
Joined: Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:36 pm
Status: Learner of English
Location: Novosibirsk. Siberia. Russia

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by AlexVlasoff »

It's written like a punk-rock song in russia {-: .
I am not in my way, it's only reflection.
My innocent soul has not ressurection.
User avatar
shakespear
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 973
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: turkey

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by shakespear »

Hi AlexVlasoff
thanks for ur comment
could u make a melody fo it?? Just a try.
Good luck
our life is like a night mare
User avatar
shakespear
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 973
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: turkey

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by shakespear »

hi
We like your comments and explanations .Please contact with us and good luck .
our life is like a night mare
User avatar
shakespear
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 973
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: turkey

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by shakespear »

hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
User avatar
farah
Rising Star
Rising Star
Posts: 84
Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2009 1:49 pm
Status: Learner of English
Location: iraq

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by farah »

hi
holla
its gd poem
we have to live our life freely
User avatar
Lara
Rising Star
Rising Star
Posts: 181
Joined: Mon Aug 01, 2011 1:57 pm
Status: Learner of English
Location: http://my.englishclub.com/profile/Lara07

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by Lara »

:!!: i hadnt seen this poem till now, it's nice
Well, Shakes i think if anyone loves he/she wouldnt leave his/her beloved, or maybe she had her reasons for doing that, Love always hurts...have u listened to this song "Love Hurts" from Nazareth, i advice u to hear it, c u :-D
User avatar
shakespear
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 973
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: turkey

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by shakespear »

Lara wrote:Love always hurts
i think in the beginning love is so sweet but after that its so hard and hurts the lovers
my point of view
User avatar
shakespear
Top Contributor
Top Contributor
Posts: 973
Joined: Tue Jan 09, 2007 12:02 pm
Status: Teacher of English
Location: turkey

Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Post by shakespear »

shakespear wrote:Don't leave me Oh dear, catch me more tightly
I feel I shall melt, I lose my force
My heart's very weak, it beats slightly
Nothing can take you; I'm with you in any course
Fly highly don't fear... like birds in the sky
Wherever you want to go, my will to go with you
Let's live a sweet life, together we must try
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too
some of my poems are short
maybe i have to copmlete
our life is like a night mare
Post Reply