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Don't Ask Me!

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Don't Ask Me!

Postby MONEM » Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:25 am

Don't Ask me!


Don't ask me how much I love you because I can't


count our love. I can't say a number but I can say I

love you more than the number of human more than the number of angles and more than the entities in this
life.

Don't ask why I love you? Because I asked my heart

million times but there is no answer. I think God

created me to pray for him and to live for you.

Don't ask me when I love you ?because I don't know

when exactly. Actually when I born I fell that I

love someone that I don't know !

Years after years I became bigger.. Every day I used

to look at the sky looking for you .. I knew that

you are real .. one day I found you..

You think that I love you for 5 years only . You

don't know that I loved for 22 years .I'm in love

with you since 1985.

You full the gap in my life .

You was with me when I cry .

You was appearing in the sky .

You was flaying and make me fly.

Your smile gave me hope..

Your happiness gave me life.

Your care gave me love.

Please don't ask me why , when and where I love you ..
If you look to my eyes you will know how much.
If you touch my heart you will know when and where.

Monem
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There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
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Postby Sunnypk » Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:45 am

funtastic poem
it seems to me that really we can't count or estimate the love
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Postby Dexter » Sun Feb 04, 2007 5:21 am

it's great, monem... really nice :D

i don't know why it reminded me of something i had read somewhere before(i don't remember where)...

it was like this(as far as i can remember):

"if you want to count my love, try to catch the raindrops in a rainy day... the raindrops you catch show how much you love me and those you miss show how much i love you." :roll:
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Postby MONEM » Mon Feb 05, 2007 6:20 am

Sunnypk,thanks for your reply .Yes sunnypk you are right we can't count love


Dexter, You words are nice and you are pushing me to write more and more .
[quote] idon't know why it reminded me of something i had read somewhere before(i don't remember where)... [/quote]

I swear that I wrote these words by my self only :wink: .Really I don't know if there is
A poem like this !!! hahahah that’s what they call it sharing mind!!
:D Thanks for your nice words.
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Postby Dexter » Mon Feb 05, 2007 6:58 am

oh, monem, i never meant to say you've copied those words from somewhere... you've taken me wrong... i didn't mean that :oops:

i just said your words reminded me of that quote maybe because both were meant to say love can't be count. :roll:

please don't take me wrong :D
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Postby Dexter » Mon Feb 05, 2007 7:07 am

MONEM wrote:Dexter, You words are nice and you are pushing me to write more and more .

yeah... right more... you write well..

keep writing :D
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Postby MONEM » Mon Feb 05, 2007 10:28 am

Hiii Dexter, Don't worry I know that you didn't mean :) .
You are a kind man .
I'll keep writing Dexter .
By the way nice to see you again :wink:
There is a man said some people see thing as they are and ask why??Idream thing that never were and ask why not!!
great minds have purposes other have wishes.
With all love
MONEM:)
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Postby Vega » Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:53 pm

Nice poem MONEM, Bravo! :)
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Postby Dexter » Tue Feb 06, 2007 5:07 am

MONEM wrote:Hiii Dexter, Don't worry I know that you didn't mean :) .
You are a kind man .
I'll keep writing Dexter .
By the way nice to see you again :wink:

monem, i'm girl, not man! :shock:

and nice to see you, too :D
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Postby MONEM » Tue Feb 06, 2007 6:13 am

Thanks Xkalibur :D

:oops: sorry Dexter i didn't know, so you are a very kind girl :wink:
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great minds have purposes other have wishes.
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