A new place

Andalusia · Post by **Andalusia** » Sun Feb 11, 2007 1:10 am

"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"

When everything in life seems to be no more good
when white turns to black
when bad days come back
I realize...how fortune I was ...
When I had no pain inside.
Everything begins to change
All I want is to hide..
To run away..
to find a way .. somewhere else..
Days go on..and life still the same ..
And I ..still me ...sad weak and lame..
I'm hurt ..it's not a shame..
I want to move to the place ..
That can draw a smile on my face..
which gives me a push ..
to start a new day...
calm happy and okay.

thank you

MONEM · Post by **MONEM** » Sun Feb 11, 2007 6:01 am

Andalusia,Wooow really I'm impressed

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I like your poem, in the beginning it's sad but the end was with hope.
This life it gives us good things sometimes and sad things sometimes.
It doesn't matter how much the life hit us what's matter Is how much we can take hits and keep moving forward with hope.
Andalusia we can go to an new place .
Thanks and keep writing :D .

Vega · Post by **Vega** » Sun Feb 11, 2007 10:54 am

Bravo! Nice poem, indeed. :)

Dexter · Post by **Dexter** » Mon Feb 12, 2007 5:35 pm

really nice, Andalusia :)

Khokha · Post by **Khokha** » Sun May 13, 2007 6:47 am

Hi Andalusia,
I like the hope inside the poem.
Best wishes :) .

Sunnypk · Post by **Sunnypk** » Sun May 13, 2007 8:18 am

Well done! it's very funtastic and effective

fortminor · Post by **fortminor** » Fri May 18, 2007 5:51 pm

It's nice.

AnhNam · Post by **AnhNam** » Sun May 27, 2007 5:28 am

"Everything begins to changes
All I want is to hide ...
to run away ...
to find away ... somewhere else"

I like these sentences, great!

Thank you