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A poem about grammar.

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Postby Khokha » Mon May 28, 2007 2:10 pm

Oh Bassam :oops:
Thank you so much…
By the way.. congratulation active guy.. you became a silver member :P
Are you happy :?:
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Postby Bassam » Fri Jun 01, 2007 10:11 am

Khokha wrote:Oh Bassam :oops:
Thank you so much…
By the way.. congratulation active guy.. you became a silver member :P
Are you happy :?:

THANK U,, sure I'm so glad ,, 8)
and I'm looking foward for the best,, :oops:
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Postby rivulet » Sat Jun 16, 2007 1:37 pm

Hi all, i am not a Gold member as well as a Silver member. However, i do hope i can join with every members in this website to write, to learn, and to know one another. I love poems very much, but i can write a poem in my native language only. What luck to me to know this great poem by Khokha. Thanks.
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Postby Khokha » Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:12 pm

Welcome rivulet, I think you will be an active member soon. You can write a poem if you have something to write about.
Enjoy your time here and best wishes for you rivulet.
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Postby rivulet » Sun Jun 17, 2007 8:56 am

Many thanks Khokha.
I will try my best to "translate" my poem to English as soon as possible ^^
Then, wait to see if i well done or not ^.*
Have a nice day.
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Postby Khokha » Sun Jun 17, 2007 4:40 pm

You too rivule and waiting for your poem pal :)
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Postby rivulet » Mon Jun 18, 2007 3:26 am

Hic, it seems stupid. However, this is the first time i write my poem ^^. It includes only four sentence:
The moon is hight
The sky is blue
I am here
And, where are you ???
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Postby Khokha » Wed Jun 20, 2007 7:36 pm

Hi rivulet,
What a nice poem! I like it and I think it's a good starting point for your writing dear. It seems like you are talking to your love in the dark night. He is absent and you are missing him. Am I right?
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Postby Bambang » Wed Jul 11, 2007 1:03 pm

You deserve an "A" for that.
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Postby Khokha » Mon Jul 16, 2007 9:28 pm

Thankx a lot bambang… :P It seems like you were an "A" student, weren't you?
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