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My love

Postby Vega » Mon May 07, 2007 11:48 am

*the poem has been deleted for some reasons
Last edited by Vega on Mon Mar 17, 2008 6:51 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby InLove » Mon May 07, 2007 1:45 pm

of course, she'll love you if you put your heart into hers.
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Postby babara » Mon May 07, 2007 6:19 pm

So sweet! according to your post the girl is really lucky and she will have to love you if she knows these feeling. :P
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Postby Vega » Tue May 08, 2007 4:04 pm

Thank you for nice words! .... :)
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Postby maksoora » Sun Aug 12, 2007 8:45 pm

I hope she loved u but,
I don't we cant force some one to love some one els it just happen

We cant control of our emotion, if we can we will be the most joy people
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Postby est » Mon Oct 22, 2007 11:24 pm

if u try to kill u
she will love u :wink:
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Postby Vega » Tue Oct 23, 2007 4:20 am

est wrote:if u try to kill u
she will love u :wink:


Thank you for the advice.
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Postby Nanning » Wed Oct 24, 2007 1:22 pm

Personally I think it is a little too farfetched.In China, we say that you can't make two a couple by tying them together.
Why do you waste so much of your life on such a female?
You love a flower, you don't have to pick it,right?
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Postby sweets » Fri Oct 26, 2007 1:12 pm

you seems that u have a big shock in ur love :( how poor ur :(
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Postby Vega » Fri Oct 26, 2007 3:17 pm

sweets wrote:you seems that u have a big shock in ur love :( how poor ur :(


Thank you.. :)..it's actually wasn't experienced. It's what I would, what I'd feel like...
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