My love

[Ms.A.Z]

good piece of writting wonderful i liked it...

[Krisi]

You love a flower, you don't have to pick it,right?

Nanning, I'm sorry, I can't clearly get what you mean? Please explain further.

[nemo]

well...i like this poem...it's great and make me thinking about my love life.....i hv not yet meet a person who can make me fall in love. i hv rejected some because my heart says no. my friends say i'm too choosy. i don't know. i can't force myself.....so. i just leave it......
this poem make me realize that i hv to follow my friends and fall in love with some one....
the problem is...what can i do...my heart still say no.....
waiting....waiting...waiting..and choosing again..that's me....

[Krisi]

I'm sitting in a silence and thinking of her,
And I know she can't be mine..
I'd pledge myself, this damn rain and my lonely soul,
but would she love me then...?
Like whiff of wind I'd call her name,
Like longawaited sun I'd shine,
but would she hear me then...?
I know she can't be mine..
her voice, her smile, her charming eyes..
I'd kill myself a thousand times...
but would she love me then...?

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Xkalibur

7 May 2007

Nice poem, Xkalibur. (So sad...)

[yali]

Hi Xkalibur,

I hope I'm not too late to read your sweet poem. It's so touching and I'm praying for your luck with her . Go ahead to befriend with her, 'hi' is a simpliest word to start. Putting your first step out so that you'd be able to reach the summit. Frankly speaking, we have realize that any friendship (or relationship) is like singing in the choir. A solo opera's never hit a result. When someone sings too slowly or too fast, it's simply because he/she hears a different tempo of the music which never matches the rest. That means he/she doesn't want to be there to sing with you. Then again, you're not alone. There are plenty out there singing together with you. You (all) are tuned but if you force yourself to tune with her, it's a hard way to make it. If I'm not mistaken, you are still quite young. You have many opportunities to meet a lot of people. You'll feel tired at the end of day if you tide yourself up with someone at a too young age. Making friendship is happier and easier than a serious relationship. A bright future is ahead of you, spending too much time on it is just a waste of your youth. Think twice and good luck.

[denvinbo]

I have my lover, but she take me away... and she said:'' I'll never like someone, except that you''. :D :)

[Ms.A.Z]

WOW well written..i wish if some one can write such things for me and mean it

[denvinbo]

Don't be too serious................ :D :D :D

[fabulous]

cool! nice poem. fantastically gorgeous!
i'd hope shw will know your love towards her!

[shakespear]

Dear ; if she read this poem and didn`t love you , she might be madness or without a heart .I never heard on a hard hearted like your love . YOU DON`T CRY ALONE. I SHALL CRY WITH YOU.GOOD LUCK.